[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 10:38 am Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings
You see Gemini's are awesome. I'm convinced we are of the same mind after reading this!!! My Gawd. Lmaoooo. I swear for life this is the first time I've laid eyes on this story and it's like you're in my head!!! You would have to read one of my stories to get what I mean. (You don't have to btw.) I'm just enamored at how alike in our writing we are.
Anywho. This chapter I was clutching my pearls the whole time!!! I can't believe Michael gave her his Warhol. It's an amazing painting and he just...gave it away. Like he is really into her. It shows from how panic striken he was with her announcing she had a date. He's almost to the point of obsession.
I mean he offered himself up to her after all. On a gold platter. A gold Andy Warhal painted platter. Literally!!!
"I'm yours" I mean heart rending!!
next chapter...
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 10:15 am Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You
Poor Zaf. Michael using his prowess to topple his guard was funny. I like that Zaf took care to think of his girl tho. He's a true friend. I could imagine someone else taking advantage of that situation with ease.
Taj listen to your brother and head your mothers words because they're facts. Start with a lie end with a terrible lie and resentment. I understand why he did lie and here in enters the intrigue but it might be disastrous if he doesn't fess up soon knowing Keisha it will be a bridge burning offense.
Lets see! <333
Date: Oct 31, 2015 09:41 am Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You
Lmaoo. Ok I stopped when I realized it is TAJ!!! Michael's nephew. I laughed hysterically for a minute....O.O!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 09:36 am Title: Chapter 7--Awkward
OMG my emotions where all up in my throat. When I read a story that pulls me in like this I tend to romanticize so I will be a gushy reviewer. Lmao.
Lawd they're teetering on dangerous ground. I'm glad she didn't drink the wine when offered, it makes you stay grounded in the fact that she is only 18.
Keisha is an incredible person and she resonates with be because I'm also an artist, painting drawing etc and portraits are my speciality too. She's a smart girl one after my own heart!
Oh oh here comes the completion!! ( * whispers softly*At first I thought it was going to be Michael's nephew Taj lmao)
On we go!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 09:11 am Title: Chapter 6--Remember The Time
Wow I had to stop reading to comment. This story is spectacular. I'm not surprised tho. I read your story Rocked Worlds on another site eons ago. Back in late 2010 early 2011. I think. I remember talking to you a bit because I mentioned that I too was a Gemini and I loved your writing. I had two stories I was writing then. You were an inspiration. I can't remember the name of the site but yeah. I thank you for the intro in to this intriguing story. I'm in love with this Michael Character. He's very much like the ones I write because I love a dark brooding cocky Michael. Lol.
Back to reading. <333
Date: Oct 30, 2015 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 10--Since Feeling is First
more plz
Date: Sep 22, 2015 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Where are youuuuuuu I miss you !
Date: Jul 29, 2015 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Girl, please come back Lol You don't know how many times I check this story for a new chapter :)
Date: Jun 16, 2015 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Update soon please! I'm missing this, one of the few stories that allows me to keep faith in the MJ fanfiction world!!
Date: Feb 23, 2015 04:27 am Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings
Congrats on your new job! You've probably been too busy to update anything
Date: Feb 22, 2015 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On
:,( :,) it's not a goodbye its a ...see you later. Keisha is Alil sad he's living I know she is
Date: Feb 22, 2015 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 3--A "Chance" Meeting
I can't lie that was a very good set up that michael did, to get Keisha alone for "coffee" Alil creepy but cute lmaooo
Date: Feb 22, 2015 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lmaooooo yea mike she is still a kid! I'm definitely going to read this
Date: Nov 14, 2014 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Update soon, Love! I'm missing this! <3 Peace
Date: Sep 25, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings
Update update update please please please