Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 20--The Beautiful Ones

I love your style of writing. It’s so captivating and intense while at the same time witty with a touch of humor. I just love it ! Also, I’m gonna go crazy with this cliff hanger. I wonder how Keisha will respond. Can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

Thank you!  At this point, I don't know how Keisha will respond.  Hell, I don't know how I would respond myself lol

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2020 11:28 am Title: Chapter 20--The Beautiful Ones

Wow! Drama

Reviewer: MJlegacy14 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2020 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

*laughs in evil* Everything is finally falling into place. I doubt she wants to play stepmom to someone who never once mentioned he had a child--or probably wouldn't have bothered to mention. Can't trust Taj. No sir. I refuse to root for their relationship to succeed. I'm team Micheisha through and through. 

Author's Response:

LOL!!!  Michaelisha!  I love that! 

Reviewer: coolkat123 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 19--Being Responsible

I’m glad Michael told her what he wanted while also respecting her relationship with Taj. I am so curious to see how this will play out because I can imagine it going so many different ways. I love the suspense and can’t wait for the next chapter. 

Author's Response:

This was a lot sexier in my mind when I started writing it, but it turned into Michael semi-confessing his feelings.

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2020 09:51 am Title: Chapter 19--Being Responsible

I want Michael to WIN so bad but I know it ain't right. 

 

Lord help us all.

Author's Response:

Ha ha!  We all want Michael to win, but he's in a situation.  The family is already split over Marisol.  Will they further split over Keisha?

Reviewer: Dirty_diana89 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2020 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

You can also watch clips of their reality tv show to get to know Taj more on YouTube . He's a cool guy , always defending his uncle and loves the fans . But in this story he needs to go away !! Lol great chapter as always .

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm going to try that!  I caught a few clips of film family on Youtube, but he doesn't say a whole lot and seems knda low key.  I'm having issues with his dialogue in this story because I can't get a feel for his personality.

Reviewer: YuliAlexaMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2020 08:19 am Title: Chapter 18--Selfish

I have really enjoyed the plot of this story. Now that Marisol is waiting outside, she's not leaving.

Author's Response:

Of course she's not leaving.  She needs to make her presence known, and Taj did tell her where he was going to be. ha ha.  

 

Working on the next update now