Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:59 am Title: A Little Too Happy Birthday
Awe what a sweet chapter :3
Michael trying to hide his boner in the pool scene hahaha
Its good he got away swiftly
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:51 am Title: The Doctor's Surprising News
AW TWINS! :D It was a joy reading how happy Michael was, he's so precious lol
Janet talking some sense into him, the way he wants Nina is not fair on her
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:48 am Title: Heat
Uh-oh! Michael completely misread her *cringe face* I felt so embarrassed for him lmao poor Mike
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:33 am Title: A Mother's Advice
I agree with Redone on this one, she does need to be easier on Mike!
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:17 am Title: Dropping by Uninvited
Its amazing how Michael can just make children come out of their shell in an instant, I'm happy he's certainly made a friend in Maddox. I'm just glad Nina has a son because without him there she would have defo kicked his ass out lol
Boy is she pissed with Mike lmao in an odd way I love how annoying he is to her
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:12 am Title: Planting the Seed
"I wouldn't touch her, but I would sure be enjoying this view for the next year."
Oh really? Haha quite funny to go back and see this since he's so hot for her touch in future chapters. XD
Even at this point you can tell both of them are in for a hell of a ride with this surrogacy, I reckoned Nina being so cold urged Michael to be even more annoying hehe
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 08:06 am Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
Just caught up with this story yesterday and oh my gosh I was so hooked I never wanted the chapters to stop! *__* Thank you for a thoroughly entertaining story, this is for sure a favourite. :3
Since I enjoyed it so much I feel it's only fair for me to leave some comments so here they come ;)
P.S Its weird that you picked Shriya Saran as the main girl: I was considering her for one of my potential plot haha, she's such a beauty! :)
<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2014 01:34 pm Title: Out of Control
The opening scene -->
I can't believe he did that. That was just....ugh. And what is up with Jenassa's thirsty self? I'm glad that bodyguard was there.... Somehow I imagine that if it were Jenassa instead, there might not have been any interference.
I'm glad Nina's mother and brother spoke some sense into her. I wish she had taken Jisela's advice. That girl knows what she is talking about. I've noticed that in stories, the wise one is rarely the one who gets the guy...it's usually her more impulsive friend. pft
I can't believe it took him so long to see Nina. Dude should have been on the next plane...or calling her mom. She would have trapped Nina into talking on the phone. My main remaining issue with Michael is that he came and spoke about the twins - NOT Nina. I'm not cool with that. I hope the convo at the restaurant is more fruitful.
......and another epic cliffhanger. Surprised? No, I'm not. Looking forward to your next update? 
Date: Jul 19, 2014 01:14 pm Title: Out of Control
Dang it all. When will these two get on the same page..for the sake of the twins at least
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2014 07:28 pm Title: Downward Spirals
A mess! All that finger action looks like it has pushed those babies down,lol. Sigh at these two again...Nina brought this mess on herself though, bc instead of just telling MJ she's talking to Marcus and WHY, she's being sneaky, which would make anyone suspicious and untrusting of you and why you're with them. Now, being the stubborn and sensitive man he is, he will shut her out to protect himself. Sigh.
Date: Jul 18, 2014 03:54 am Title: Downward Spirals
Talk about two stubborn mules. They butt heads when they should be embracing.. Smarten up Mikey
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2014 09:42 pm Title: Downward Spirals
Those moves in the doctor's office....smh.
Michael and Nina need to communicate, ASAP. Either he leaves a room or she leaves a room. I hope he gets put on bedrest alongside her. :D
Thanks for another great chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Not Your Trophy Girl
Oh NO, that Ja-whatever her name is hoe didn't! ? I gotta hear and see all the shade Nina threw in her interview...a hit dog will holler and ol' girl squealed like a stuck pig, lol. Stake your claim Nina!;)
Now, I feel a little bad for Marcus, but he honestly couldn't have thought that woman was going to wait for 10 years for him. Please! To the left Marcus, there's a NEW sheriff in town-Michael Jackson! ;)
Please, keep going!
Date: Jul 16, 2014 02:57 am Title: Not Your Trophy Girl
Oh damn, she's in the shit now with Marcus!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2014 10:07 pm Title: Not Your Trophy Girl
Go Nina! I'm surprised Michael didn't get more upset. I'd like to hear more about what the media is showing from that interview...
...and walking out of the studio when Michael is singing to her?! 