[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 11 ~ Baby Be Mine
leave kevin. michael is the one you been waiting on for your whole life. he loves you. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue. sorry for being silent
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for commenting! It means a lot to me! And yeah, Kevin is definitely in the way of Michelle and Michael's relationship. Thank you for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 11:45 am Title: Chapter 11 ~ Baby Be Mine
YAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!
They kissed!
Kevin's just over in the corner being... Kevin. << That cracked me up!
Awesome chapter as always.
Author's Response:
Yay they finally kissed haha!!! Hmmm I wonder what's going to happen next? ;) and lol poor Michael can't stand Kevin! Thank you for reading and commenting! I love your comments!
Date: Jun 27, 2014 11:36 am Title: Chapter 10 ~ The Jacksons
This just keep getting funnier and funnier! I especially liked where Katherine blurted out that Michael loved Michelle!
Author's Response:
Poor Katherine she didn't know lol! I hope you find the upcoming chapters funny as well! Thank you for reading and commenting!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ The Lady in His Life
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im in love with this story. sorry for beiing a silent reader. they were about to kiss!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you love this story! That means I'm doing a good job! I hope you love all the chapters I upload! Thank you for commenting!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ The Lady in His Life
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im in love with this story. sorry for beiing a silent reader. they were about to kiss!!!!!!!
Date: Jun 25, 2014 10:14 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ The Lady in His Life
Ahh haaa!! Interrupted again! His mom is funny, too. I like her 😂
Author's Response:
Lol one day Michael and Michelle will be able to kiss in peace! And I love Michael's mom she's a sweetheart! Thanks for reading and commenting! Much love to you! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 07:10 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Know You
It was hilarious as always!!! Still laughing.😅 Great chapter. Please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank ya! I'm glad someone finds my story funny!! I love your comments, my goodness lol!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 06:29 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Know You
Awww this chapter was so sweet! I cannot wait for the next one! !! I know it's gonna be amazing.
I like how you captured Michael's essence in this chapter. You did an excellent job! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much! I try really hard when I write these chapters, and I'm glad you're enjoying them. It gets better as the story goes on! :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2014 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ Wish
This is an excellent, well-written story so far!
I really admire your structure, your character personalities and the storyline lol. I hope you update as so as you can! :D
P.S.- Michelle kinda gives me a Gugu Mbatha-Raw feel.
(She's a beautiful mixed British actress :p)
Author's Response:
Woah, thank you! That really means a lot. That's really sweet of you to tell me that, and it inspires me to continue this story. I hope you enjoy reading each and every chapter that I upload! And I never thought about Gugu Mbatha-Raw! She's PERFECT for being Michelle!!!!
Date: Jun 21, 2014 12:04 am Title: Chapter 7 ~ Welcome to Neverland
Hurry hurry with the next chapter!! Lol...i cant wait to see what happens at dinner wink wink:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I'll try to update this story every chance I get. Please continue reading! ;)
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2014 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Welcome to Neverland
I didn't like it... I loved it!!! This is probably my favorite story on here. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Okay, you officially just made my day. Thank you so much for reading, love!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 20, 2014 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Explanation Please
Hahahahahhahahaha!!!!!!! This chapter made me crack up. When Michelle and Michael met...OMG I almost fell on the floor laughing. Awesome just awesome.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you like my story! Your comments literally make me smile! I'll try to update as soon as possible! Thank you!!!! :D