[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 04:48 am Title: Chapter 11 ~ Baby Be Mine
finally they kiss cant wait for more this story is awesome
Author's Response:
Thank you, you're so sweet! Thank you for reading my story and leaving sweet comments! It makes my day!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 04:16 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Know You
lol to funny he like i just to a shower and washed my hair great chapter
Author's Response:
Michael has to keep his curly locks on point lol!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 03:59 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ Surprise!
wonder what will happen lol
Author's Response:
Lol, hmmmm... :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 03:43 am Title: Chapter 3 ~ Michael?!
lol that cant be good loving this story keep them chapters coming
Author's Response:
I will! There's so much more to come in this book!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 03:31 am Title: Chapter 1 ~ Wish
very nice story so far cant wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 12, 2014 12:03 am Title: Chapter 16 ~ Peace Before The Storm
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue :):):):):)):):):):):)
Author's Response:
I will! Just for you lol! :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 16 ~ Peace Before The Storm
Of course I loved the chapter! I always do, knucklehead! XP
They are just so adorable it's not even funny...
Except for the watergun part, that was hilarious. Epic Backfire!!!
Author's Response:
Lol!! I'm glad you loved the chapter! That means I've done my part as the writer! And yeah, Michael and his water guns... he has them everywhere haha! Thank you for reading and commenting, love! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 16 ~ Peace Before The Storm
Of course I loved the chapter! I always do, knucklehead! XP
They are just so adorable it's not even funny...
Except for the watergun part, that was hilarious. Epic Backfire!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 16 ~ Peace Before The Storm
I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Lol omg I am so excited! I can actually feel the passion they're sharing right now!
Please update soon! :DD
Author's Response:
That's wonderful that you can feel the passion they're sharing! I always feel that if a reader can actually feel the emotions the characters are sharing, then that means the story is well written! Thank you for reading and commenting!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 ~ Wish
OMG! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! <3
ANd I'm so happy that you liked my suggestion as well. I was so happy when I saw that you used it! :DDD LOL I was so excited.
I can't wait for the next update!! :DD Please update as soon as you can.
Michelle and Michael are the best!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I LOVED your suggestion! Thank you sooo much for giving me the idea! It was PERFECT! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I hope you like all the chapters to come! ;)
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2014 08:27 am Title: Chapter 15 ~ Ghost of Jealousy
Short but awesome!
Ugh! That thing came back! I thought it was gone! Guess not...
Jealous much, Michael?
Great! Of course, why wouldn't it be!
Author's Response:
You're too sweet! And yeah the thing is back unfortunately lol. We just have to see how Michelle handles it... But thank you so much for reading! Your comments are the best! Much love to you! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2014 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 14 ~ It's Knight Time
Okay I'm keeping my promise...ahem...
Where the fudge have you been!?! Keeping me waitin' on that chapter for days!!! I was about to go crazy!!!
Now that that's out of the way. I wonder who that woman is?
And I know how you feel when reading other fanfictions. I feel that way too, but then I realized that some people have similiar styles with a twist to them. It's really interesting!
Great chapter as always! I know I talk a lot. LOL ^U^
Author's Response:
Lol I'm sorry, I'm sorry! I'll try to update as soon as I can for you haha! And it's nice to know that someone understands how I feel when reading other fan fictions. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! And nope, you don't talk a lot you're just funny!! Your comments always make me smile. Thank you. <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 13 ~ Fate Under Moonlight
Aww...I was gonna go off on you for not posting...
But since you're not feeling good, I'll save it for the next chapter. :)
Carol!!!!! Why Carol?!? She was so innocent!
I bet it's Kevin...I think that's what his name was. I'm too lazy to go back and check, but yeah I think it was her ex.
Awesome. Awesome. Awesome chapter!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2014 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 12 ~ Girlfriend
She confessed! About damn time!!! XD
You're right Kevin did deserve that. Especially after all that stuff he said to Michael...
Mm-mm-mm SMH :/
Great chapter!
Date: Jun 29, 2014 01:12 pm Title: Chapter 12 ~ Girlfriend
Wooo! Finally! I'm glad Kevin got what he deserved, he was so disrespectful towards Michael I just wanted to punch him on the face...
Great chapter, though!;)