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Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 14

NOPE NOPE NOPE NAW NO HELL FUCKING NO I'm not about the whole abortion thing butKamille gots to g o go! LAWD you are trying to give me a heart attack. I cannot deal, this is Michael's fault for being such a ho, I could smack him my own damn self ughhh 

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 13

Whhhhyyy is Latoya pressuring her like this isn't a big deal, it's gonna take time for her to want to talk about it. And okay okayyy this friends stuff, I can get with that but still waiting for more. *rubs hands together* 

Reviewer: youarethesun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 15

Erica need to get her fucking life, dictating shit. She need to pop, lock, and drop that attitude. Michael need to get his dick cut off, he gonna have little babies all over town. WHERE THE HELL IS TREY?! Michael is there, and he's not? BRUH. I can't wait for hell to break loose. This is a really good story, please continue. 



Author's Response:

OMGGGG girrrlll you are hilarious why you just kill me like that?? Pop Lock and Drop that attitude bruh Im not coming back from this comment this made my daggon day omg thank you girl thank you more will come I will be update more and more each day stay tuned love lol

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 15

Oh shit? Erica? Wants Michael? All HEEEELLLL is about to break loose if Liyah finds out. I think Erica needs to tell Liyah if she claims to be a best friend like she say. And one more thing. I like Trey, I really do but why am I having bad vibes about him not showing up at Liyah' s show. Something is telling me he kinda fucking up on the slick side. If true, I'm gonna fuck his ass up right along with Erica' s thirsty ass. Can't believe she kisses Mike. Smdh. Best friend my ass!!!!!! Lol



Author's Response:

lmmfao please dont kill me Bre girl you are hilarious why do yall love killing me in these comments. Trey lol stay tuned girl stay tuned. Erica thirsty ass omggg Michael dont even like her

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:14 am Title: Chapter 14

Aww I hope you feel better :) and damn!!! Ugh! I hope that bitch lyin abt being pregnant



Author's Response:

thanks love , lol stay tuned boo

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 01:28 am Title: Chapter 14

SMDH. Mike done really fucked up now!!!! Men can't learn to keep it in their pants huh?

Kamille probably lying, but if she really is pregnant, I wouldn't be surprised. 

Aliyah should have told Mike from the getco that she was pregnant; even though he just started his career at the time, she still should have told him. You don't keep that from the child's father let alone abort their baby. SMDH...again.

Mike needs to get his shit together, this is ridiculous.

Awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

lol girl I feel you they really dont like its like they need to stick it in something thats why they are so stupid I swear. Exactly the way they been getting down like come on now Kamille knew what she was doing trick no treat head ass , exactly Aliyah isnt off the hook either . Thank thank you my love means alot

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 14

Awww, Liyah was going to tell him, but didn't want to ruin the excitement about him getting signed to that record deal. But she still should have told him tho. He had a right to know cause he was the father. And now let me get to Kamille's ass. The thot said she's whet? Pregnant? Oh Lord save me now from this. And what the hell she talking about they can't go their separate ways. Like bitch, do you really need to be with Mike that bad all because you're preggos? I KNOW alot of girls who have broken up with their fucking boyfriends or vice versa, and found out about their pregnancies sometimes after or sometimes before the break up but they don't say to the boy that they can't go their separate ways. They just tell em so the daddy can know about their child and be in their child's life then they skiddaddle. She is just one I can't be without you Michael-we can't go our separate ways-clingy ass bitch/hoe. Like get the fuck girl. Lol. Please update soon. Love this story.



Author's Response:

lmmfao aye yo Bre you are hilarious I think I just died girl you crazy , exactly Kamille believes that just because she pregnant her and Michael have to be together she needs to grow up quick like Michael dont want you girl. Exactly girl me too thats why I want my story to touch on real life events because Im sure everyone knows a Kamille , a Michael and a Aliyah I live for your reviews lol thanks boo

Reviewer: mysonmjforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

i feel like this hoe is lying how all of a sudden she pregnant i want to pluck her like really liyah please bang her dumb ass when you find out michael wtf was you thinking kamille gets on my nerves an she in the way girl go sit down somewhere

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

God I hope she's lying Kamille is gotdamn annoying.

Author's Response:

she is beyond the word clingy lol she dumb

Reviewer: youarethesun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4


HOLD THE FUCK UP. NO, NO, NO. Kamille nappy headed dookie headed ass did not just say she pregnant. That baby could be anybody's, she probably slept with Moses or something. Michael stupid ass done did it now. Now he'll never get his girl back. 



Author's Response:

LMMFAOO OMGGGG yo this gif got me DEAD and I love Good Times omg I remember that episode too omg omg omg , Slept with Moses Im sooo dead omg oh god stay tuned thanks for this laugh girl thank you for your review XD

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMMFG what the fuck Michael yo when Aliyah finds out she is going to kill Kamille and Michael . Kamille just trapped his dumbass just cause you pregnant not going to make him love you hoe. Michael you should have known to use protection even if the bitch did say she was on the pill even I know that was a lie Michael your a superstar this bitch is a hoodrat she only want your money she didnt even like you back in the day. Im so mad like Im really pissed you start to get back on track with Liyah even though they are friends but still like we all know that is Michael's baby like what the hell was you thinking Michael Im livid right now huuuuu. Anyways that flashback was beautiful so cute Michael WAS such a sweetheart I want to know what Momma K gonna say when he tells her Kamille pregnant

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 14

See whatcha dumbass did Michael? Yo dick probably got all kinds of HIV shit. Bastard.



Author's Response:

lmmfao aye yo I think I just died

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2014 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 13

Latoya cant force anyone to do anything what she think this is. Michael and Liyah is finally friends took them knuckleheads long enough lol update soon

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2014 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 13

Why is Latoya in their business like that I know she want whats best for her brother but damn bitch chill back you trying to force Aliyah to confess a sensitive subject damn gahlee. Michael shut your weakass up you know that punch hurt. Anyways I loved this girl Liyah and Michael are bipolar as hell I love it I actually missed their bond cause Trey is geeking right about now update soon

Reviewer: mysonmjforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2014 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 13

Michael ism full of that good ole bullshit even I knew he just aint want to be friends with Aliyah like come on now he just dont want her around trey. I cant wait for more Im so glad you posted it back up update soon please and I love your new story girl

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