Date: Dec 21, 2016 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a cute story! Enjoyed it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:42 am Title: Chapter 6
I enjoyed reading it very much.⑧
Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:30 am Title: Chapter 5
I really did enjoy this chapter. Good job!
Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Good development. Very good descriptive writing. I can see everything that you describe in each scene.
Date: Jul 15, 2015 01:04 am Title: Chapter 3
I like the way you are letting the story develop.
Date: Jul 15, 2015 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
I like the way the story is slowly progressing.
Date: Jul 15, 2015 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice introduction to the story.
Date: Aug 14, 2014 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
this story is just too cute
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2014 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
awww how sad! Is there gona be a sequel of when they're older! Young love is the sweetest love! They were so cute!
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2014 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
You have to make a sequal where they are both grown and see each other again please!! lol
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2014 07:25 am Title: Chapter 6
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue is mike gonna turn ito a bad boy because he was so depressed when she left?
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2014 05:40 am Title: Chapter 6
Please do the one of Michael and Parker as teenagers!!!! I would love to see that!!!
Author's Response:
Alright :D will do! Thank you soo much for reading and reviewing! I really appriciate it :D Much Love <333
Date: Jul 28, 2014 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
PLEASEEEEEE UPDATE SOON >.< lmao i luv this story
Author's Response:
haha! thanks so much :D I'm glad you enjoy it! <333 Much love!
Date: Jul 26, 2014 06:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Yay!!! They had their first kiss!!! Too bad about Michael's nose though. It seemed that football had perfect timing. Those two are the sweetest couple! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Yay!! :D yeah too bad about his nose :[ I Know right! they are sooo cute indeed! thanks for all your support hun! Much Love <333
Date: Jul 26, 2014 12:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Awwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response:
hehe ^__^ thanks