[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2023 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my days,why did this have to end .I loved itttttttt
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2020 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DARN HOT OMG
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2016 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amazing!!!! And funny
[Report This]Date: Mar 31, 2015 04:09 am Title: Chapter 2
It sucks for Michael that his Mr. Perfection turned out to be Mr. Rapist. I already realised that Tobi was only trying to get him out of that situation when he inisted on talking, but nooo, Michael just wouldn't have it. I initially thought Owen was just a playa' and he would only have Michael for the night while MJ clearly wanted more and that's what Tobi wanted to warn him for, but it was worse than that. I'm glad Tobi was sticking close by.
Date: Aug 14, 2014 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ah! I L.O.V.E!
[Report This]Date: Aug 09, 2014 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG YOU WRITE SOME OF THE BEST SEX SCRNES IMAGINABLE. THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
HOT!! XD:):):):) IT COULDN'T GET ANY BETTER SERIOUSLY. I LOVED READING EVERY LITTLE AND BIG DETAIL OF IT. XD THERE WAS A FIRE GOING ON IN THAT ROOM. XD I'M LOVING IT. XD PLEASE CONTINUE. I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR MORE OF THIS JUICY STORY. I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A PERFECT 10. XD
Author's Response:
Did I heat the oven in that room? Probs, yes because you feel the heat already...lol
Thanks a lot for your kind support
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2014 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
"three weeks later," huh? i know this sounds odd, but i just had the thought of michael... ...being... ...a preggo. did the condom break after he passed out during sex? and btw, "mikewise." heh heh. i think i'll be saying that more often.
Author's Response:
Mmmm....kinky huh? Did I mentioned that they used the rubber during sex? lol....Mikewise should be more wise if he don't want being...a preggo
Date: Jun 07, 2014 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
woah! it was predictable to me that owen would do him wrong! another fine work!
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
JUST AS I SUSPECTED MICHAEL AND TOBI HAS FEELINGS FOR EACH OTHER. XD I MEAN TOBI ALMOST BEAT OWEN TO DEATH BECAUSE HE WAS HURTING MICHAEL. PERSONALLY I'M GLAD HE STOPED OWEN. MICHAEL WOULD HAVE BEEN GREATLY DAMAGED FROM SUCH AN EXPERIENCE. TOBI AND MICHAEL HAVE AN UNDERCURRENT STRONG CHEMISTRY GOING ON BETWEEN THEM. XD FANTASTIC STORY. XD I'M LOVING IT. PLEASE CONTINUE. XD I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A MUCH DESERVED 10.
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
THIS STORY IS GREAT!! XD:):) IT EVEN HAS A LOT OF HUMOR. I LIKE THAT. I THINK MICHAEL IS VERY ATTRACTED TO TOBI BUT JUST DOESN'T WANT TO ADMIT IT. TOBI HAS BEEN VERY KIND TO HIM. LAST BUT NOT LEAST I LOVE HEARING MICHAEL TALK ABOUT HOW LOUD HE IS WHEN HE'S EXCITED AND THE PLEASURE HE RECEIVES FROM ANAL STIMULATION. THAT'S SO HOT. XD PLEASE CONTINUE. I'M GIVING THIS CHAPTER A 10. XD:):):)
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 07:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Ommff, did that just really happen? At first I thought that was really mikes dream guy but then I was like..this quick?
The whole almost rape scene, I was like WHERE IS TOBY!?!
I had a feeling Toby was gonna tell Mike to be careful. But of course he didn't want to listen!
Great update!٩(๑d75;▽d75;๑)۶
Date: Jun 04, 2014 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really cute , I kinda want them to date ! Lol
Author's Response:
Yeah same here....wish cute moment between them would leave you cute notes... Step it up boys!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2014 09:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooo, this sounds soo good. I have a feeling that Tobi and Mike will do something together. Or not! This is really good, even for a first chapter. Keep it up! (a377;a381;ωa381;a377;)
Author's Response:
THANK YOU so much!
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2014 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
great story! i just can't wait for mikey to find the prince charming he's searching for.
btw; how's that story i requested for? goin' good? don't worry, i'm not trying to rush you. take all the time you need to write it, bro.
Author's Response:
THANKS!!!
I'm still writing it, but Michael is not famous in the story, as you know all of my stories are original. I hope you enjoy the story the same as I wrote it.
**I'll give a hint ===> #Mermaidman