Date: Dec 09, 2021 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 7
I felt so many things reading this chapter...ugh! "Come to bed with me" slapped me in the face. Poor Michael:(
Date: Nov 28, 2021 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
This made me so anxious but I can't stop!
Date: Nov 28, 2021 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh goodness... it's still early in the story but I am captured by Michael and Dani's relationship already!!And Dani meeting the children was so sweet! I can't wait to keep reading.
Date: Mar 08, 2017 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awww hell to the yeah ain't Anthony body gonna read this ins not cry! Amazing work
Date: Dec 21, 2016 09:43 am Title: Prologue
Please update, this is sooo good!!!!!
Date: Jul 26, 2016 05:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Omg girl please update this story. I love it!!!
Date: May 08, 2016 08:06 pm Title: Prologue
This is a very attention grabbing story. I love it!
Date: May 05, 2016 10:54 am Title: Chapter 9
I love your story
Date: Jan 23, 2016 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 9
I hope there's more to come, I'm really into this story now!!
Date: Oct 24, 2015 05:43 pm Title: Prologue
To much. It is very upsetting.
Date: Aug 26, 2015 10:14 am Title: Chapter 9
Please update soon!
Date: Aug 03, 2015 05:55 pm Title: Prologue
I'm missing this story dear!
I thought about it whilst listening to "Angel of Mine" by Monica.
Again, you're fantastic at what you do girl!
Date: Jul 20, 2015 06:00 am Title: Chapter 9
Omggggg girl. This story is beautiful. I love it. Please update soon. Pleaseeee
Author's Response:
Thank you so much chica! I'll update asap!
Date: Jul 20, 2015 12:12 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh, this chapter was wonderful.
Sitting here, trying to hold in the tears.
I've had to visit someone in hospice before so reading this kinda brought me back.
I love that Dani has been accepted into the family and that she still cares for the kids like they're her own. Despite Michael's condition, she hasn't just abandonedthem. And her talking to him...that's what really got me choked up.
But there's improvement! Maybe there's light at the end of the tunnel...
Please update soon :)
also, my story , tow has been updated :)
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I've actually gone through the hospice thing too with my great aunt. She's the motivation behind this chapter. Everything I witnessed in this type of situation was from her. I miss her dearly. I miss all of my great aunts. I only have my grandmother now. Although we bicker, she means a lot to me. :)
I promise to update soon and btw I love TOW.
Date: Jul 19, 2015 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 9
This made me so emotional, sorry, but I'm crying, I really am...but it was a beautiful chapter....Please, save Michael in this story!
Author's Response:
:) oh jeez. Don't cry! I'll update as soon as I can.