Reviews For The Lonely Hearts Club.
Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed 
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Date: May 23, 2014 01:58 am Title: Uncomfortable stares, and loose hair.
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2014 01:58 am Title: Uncomfortable stares, and loose hair.
This might be interesting :) <3
Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Uncomfortable stares, and loose hair.
Date: May 22, 2014 07:54 pm Title: Uncomfortable stares, and loose hair.
This chapter wasn't boring at all. Your writing has a sense of imagery so that the reader can picture everything that's going on perfectly. And so far, I'm liking the story. I like Michael's character in this. All in all, good chapter. This is definitely going in my favorites :)