Reviews For THE MOB BOSS
Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed 
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Date: Nov 26, 2014 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks a lot that should help
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2014 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
You should really use signs. The way you write is confusing. Use "...." around the parts where people say something.
An example: "Oh my god," he screamed.
I'm not trying to be annoying I'm just trying to help. All for love.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot that should help