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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2015 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

Wow!!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2015 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

Real anger management.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2015 03:44 pm Title: Part 1

Wha??

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 04:05 pm Title: Part 1

Please write more. I'm in love with this. It's soo HAWT!! 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 3

Damn this is sexy. And he is a pussy eating champ! Goodness. Hopefully she will return the favor and do an equally great job at singing on the Mike. Ha.

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2014 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lol Here you are saying it isn't even 2000 words, but that was so sexy I think over 2000 words would be too much for us! Whoo! Is describing this by saying "hot" repeatedly too cliche? I don't care! XD Hot hot hot!! I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2014 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

Are they actually gonna fuck? Or just... Suck?

Reviewer: BrownSugarBabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2014 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 3

Girl, I have been waiting.....GIRL!

This was so hot and well-written! xoxo You did an amazing job! <33

You re one of my favorite writers on here. You write the best love scenes ever! I hope you get some inspiration to write more! :D 

 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2014 05:07 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh. My. Damn! Is it hot in here? *fans self* Can't wait for the next part!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Part 1

Excuse me?!?!!?!?! First, you aplogize for shortness(but in my book, 1000 words and above is lovely length) then you give us something extremely amazing and sexy and you say you'r elosing your touch?!?!?!? Hun, the day you lose your touch is the day the sky turns into bubblegum, aliens sing "Beat It", Mars becomes a sun, and, as a wise man once said, when the day is night and night becomes the day.  Super sexy chapter! I'm going with Mike on this one, because I mean, he's not forcing in a " Mean Michael I'm your boss" way, she's happily going along with it. But XDXD when she said "I work out" I immediately though of "Sexy And I Know It" by LMFAO(Watch the video, it will make you laughXDXD) The only thing that could make this better is nothing! Lol Amazing chapter!!! ^_^

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 2

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!):):):):):):):):)): yay!!!!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2014 04:55 am Title: Part 1

oh my angry sex love it



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Tee hee. ;)

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 10:47 pm Title: Part 1

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE LETS GET THE NAUGHTYYYYY ONNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):):):):):):):):):):)



Author's Response:

Next part is up!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Part 1

Holy Hell that was sexy! Can't wait to read the rest of it!! ;)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 05:50 pm Title: Part 1

Super-cali-fragi-listic-epaladocious!!!!!!!(sp?) Isabel's good for not just giving into MJ, even though he could have a good side to him I guess. But OMJOMJOMJOMJ youuuuuuuuuuuuu! You! You who make adult novels look as bland as a dictionart, who does smut and sexiness with ease! Welcome back!!!  You're sharing your awesometitude with us, which is amazing! More if you please! :-))))))



Author's Response:

This review is awesome! Haha. I love it! Thank you soooo much. :D

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