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Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 3 - You've Got A Friend

Awww I loved it..got choked up the entire time I was reading it..loved how you portrayed me and I felt it truly would have gone this way if I had known he was being treated so badly by AEG and I got to find a way to contact him!..

Thank you again..love you so much for writing this!! *hugs you*



Author's Response:

Awww, Christy! *hugs you back* You are so welcome, hon! I'm so pleased that you like it. 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Really?! YAY! Haha, yeah, I tend to catch myself staring at him in Smooth Criminal. Man could wear the HELL out of a suit! ;)



Author's Response:

I finally got Moonwalker on BluRay in January and I watch Come Together, and Smooth Criminal, religiously. I even love the ending with the African singers. You are so right, though. He could make anything look good. Lord Jesus..... *fans myself* 

Reviewer: LikeAVirgin Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

I love your banner! I'm trying to post a picture/banner for mine but I don't know how..Could you help!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 - You've Got A Friend

Aww, this was a sweet story! It makes me sad though. I wish someone could have been his Christy in real life. :( 

Ooh! I just realized, there should be one more story then it'll be my turn. YAY! *does happy dance*



Author's Response:

LMAOOO!!! Yep, you're right, Kendra! I'm working on Kunda's as we speak, then it's yours. I might get out three today, including Christy's, so keep an eye out........;) And LOL at that gif....I love it.....

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Yay!! Thanks so much; I'm so happy! You did do an excellent job and I'm so glad you'll let me do another!! XD

well, honestly, my favorite part was when Michael and I were yelling at each other, so for the next one...would you be willing to write michael and I in an established relationship? And during the story we're in the middle of a big fight (I'll let you decide what it's about). Neither one of us are going to cave, I try to walk away, he doesn't let me, I slap him, he slaps me back - that kind of thing. Overall, I would really like it to lead to a very violent, fight-for-dominance, angry sex ending. Feel free to throw anything along the lines of jealousy, possessiveness, protectiveness, or something of the sort into the mix. Even play around with the alcoholism, if that's the route you wanna go, picking up from the first one shot. :) either way, by the end of it, I think it would be quite endearing if we acknowledge that yes, we're both angry and we drive each other crazy sometimes, but we'd never truly hurt each other and we're still in love...

it isn't too complicated is it? You just got my muse and imagination running wild with what you've written so far! :) if you need a broader ranger of suggestions, please don't hesitate to let me know! I'm so excited to see more!! Lotsa love! Xoxox

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Yay!! Thanks so much; I'm so happy! You did do an excellent job and I'm so glad you'll let me do another!! XD

well, honestly, my favorite part was when Michael and I were yelling at each other, so for the next one...would you be willing to write michael and I in an established relationship? And during the story we're in the middle of a big fight (I'll let you decide what it's about). Neither one of us are going to cave, I try to walk away, he doesn't let me, I slap him, he slaps me back - that kind of thing. Overall, I would really like it to lead to a very violent, fight-for-dominance, angry sex ending. Feel free to throw anything along the lines of jealousy, possessiveness, protectiveness, or something of the sort into the mix. Even play around with the alcoholism, if that's the route you wanna go, picking up from the first one shot. :) either way, by the end of it, I think it would be quite endearing if we acknowledge that yes, we're both angry and we drive each other crazy sometimes, but we'd never truly hurt each other and we're still in love...

it isn't too complicated is it? You just got my muse and imagination running wild with what you've written so far! :) if you need a broader ranger of suggestions, please don't hesitate to let me know! I'm so excited to see more!! Lotsa love! Xoxox

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Never Alone

*sniff* 

wow!!! 

I...honestly don't know what to say! My god, that was incredible! You wrote me incredibly well, actually. And I love the way michael scolded me for drinking so much! It was cute in a very humorous way! And that's actually how I would imagine the scene playing out...

also, very lovely and sexy scene at the end! I like how no words needed to be said at the End. Oh! AND the comment where I said that I want to have children if he's the father! Yeah... I WOULD say that! 

Overall, a very beautiful job! I was so excited to see you uploaded my one shot! And I'm soooooo happy with it! Thank you, thank you SOOOO very much! I can't wait to read what else you have coming out!!

(p.s. Can I do another one some time?)



Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it, Randi! When you wrote write down your personality, I immediately saw the drinking scene in my head, as well as the argument. I saw it playing out in my head, and I'm so happy that you're happy! Of course you can do another one!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 11:03 am Title: Chapter 2 - Never Alone

Oooh this is really good!! Very well written I feel bad for Randi how she was so lonely and stuff^^. Don't think she was wrong to be in love for romance can start from anything even in the case where she and Mixhael hated each other.

You're getting better, keep it up!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Christy! I'm brainstorming on yours as we speak. Be on the lookout! 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 09:57 am Title: Chapter 2 - Never Alone

Girl this was so crazy beautiful. Literally, you made like tears come out my face. Your writing is sent from heaven. I can't wait until you publish a full length story. 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I'm blushing like crazy! Thank you so much, K! That means so much coming from you! I'm so glad you like the way I write. <3<3

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 09:42 am Title: Chapter 2 - Never Alone

Aww, I loved this! Poor Randi, her life was rough. I'm glad Michael could make it all better though. ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah.....Michael could make anything better ;) Thanks, Kendra!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Haha, this was sexy, cute and funny all at once! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kendra! It means a lot! <3

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2014 08:58 am Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

I love mine! Thank you. :)

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2014 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Aww that was funny and cute..good luck with the rest..

btw I saw via the site statistics you have me and a story of mine in your faves..thank you for the support..would love to know what you think of them, your fave parts, etc.

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2014 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

OMG, thank you so much, I love it!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

YAY! I'm so glad you like it, Destiny!<3 I was so nervous posting this, you have no idea!

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2014 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Your writing is so good! Omg. I have to make a request now.



Author's Response:

Oh gosh, thanks, K! Go ahead and leave a request; you know I've got you, girl! ;)

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