Date: Jul 31, 2014 10:05 am Title: Calling All Readers!!! Please Read!
Ok I'm a new reader and interesting enough I have insomnia (so I know how it feels, poor michael, it's frustrating) however your story is the first I read and I spent the whole night reading it!!!!!!! OMG I'm hooked!!!!! It's got my emotions all over the place LOL!!! I beg of you PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Calling All Readers!!! Please Read!
Ur doing fine, some people just like to read the story like a book and in a book u can't write comments after every page on the page. But they still love the story. Same with u, they may not write but they r reading
Date: Jul 06, 2014 01:06 pm Title: Calling All Readers!!! Please Read!
Make mj work for it. Carla should make him wait a few chapters before taking him back. He needs to know how she was hurt. She shouldn't kiss another man though... I just think it fast forwarded too much. :-)
Date: Jun 28, 2014 09:03 am Title: Chapter 11
Awww that was cute, continue please
Date: Jun 10, 2014 02:54 am Title: Chapter 10
Wow continue please
Date: May 29, 2014 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Continue please
Date: May 24, 2014 07:20 am Title: A/N: To my readers!!
I didn't see them on my computer either but I can see them on my phone though.o
Author's Response:
I think they're all good to go now
Date: May 23, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Prologue
Oh and I can't believe she aborted his baby knowing he wanted children. I understand she's not ready, but keeping it from him and lying is wrong. Hell aborting the baby was wrong. When he finds out he is going to be devastated.
Author's Response:
This is a response to all of my readers! I have finallt fixed the problem and now you should be able to see the visuals and like I said thanks for the feedback it's appreciated!!
Date: May 23, 2014 09:02 pm Title: A/N: To my readers!!
No I haven't been able to see them. Love this story by the way. And am glad you used Aaliyah as Carla. She was so beautiful. You know VH1 is doing a movie about Aaliyah soon. Im excited. :)
Author's Response:
I agree she fits the character perfectly and I will try my best to fix those problems thanks for the feedback:)
Date: May 23, 2014 07:45 pm Title: A/N: To my readers!!
Nope, just a tiny blue box in a big white box. Lol
Date: May 23, 2014 07:28 pm Title: A/N: To my readers!!
Nope, just a tiny blue box in a big white box. Lol
Date: May 23, 2014 11:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Wtf is wrong with her, this is pissing me off, why would she do that she's so selfish, URGH she's on my hate list right now. Continue
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2014 08:44 am Title: Chapter 8
I need another update! D:
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2014 01:53 am Title: Chapter 8
She should have told him! God, she should have told him. This is really gonna hurt their relationship when he finds out. I'm rooting for Carla to tell him soon. She has to!
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
Date: May 18, 2014 03:00 am Title: Chapter 7
No come on don't leave us with a cliffy continue please