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Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2014 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: Once a bridesmaid;always a bridesmaid

Poor Erin I feel so bad for her. Please update soon! :)



Author's Response: I've actually finished the whole story. I can post another chapter right away!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 5: Gotta get you outta my system

Lief is a cuttie. I like the chapter, so you can breathe a sigh of relief now, lol



Author's Response: Great!! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 2: Keep it in the closet

Lol Erin was all like "i had a dream" xD no gurl it was real xP

when Erin  hid in the closet it reminded me of R Kelly trapped in the closet xD (sorry for all these R Kelly references just seems to be my mind right now) :P

anyway great chapter can't wait to read the next one

Love, Emma <33

 



Author's Response: I'm pretty sure Erin is not disappointed that it was a dream! xD I was thinking more Michael and Keep it in the Closet! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Mjmoonwalkergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Blame it on the alcohol

another good start to another great story. :D im glad you're back! Love it already. The end made me think of R. Kelly's bump and grind  "my minds telling me nooo but my body, my body's tellin me yeeeesss" XD

Can't wait to read more  <33



Author's Response: Yes, I'm back!! Trying to find something productive to do with my spring break. Lol!! I didn't think of that when I was writing it and I always though Keith Sweat sang that! Wow, I've gotta go back to music education class! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: ilovemichaeljackson34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 4: Loosing you

I like this.. It's VERY interesting and funny at the same time :)) CONTINUE PWEASE! :D



Author's Response: Thank you!! I will!

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 3: The cold shoulder

this is gonna be soooooo awkward or them!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I will!1

Reviewer: ShantiJ_Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Blame it on the alcohol

Quick question! Did this idea root from the movie "Something Borrowed"? Is so I LOVE that movie and if you haven't heard of it you should definitely watch it , it's magnificent. Please continueee!



Author's Response: Yes I did! I haven't seen the movie but I have an idea about what happens. It also happens to be a book too. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 09:06 am Title: Chapter 3: The cold shoulder

OMG. GIRRRLLLLL this is epic!! I cannot WAIT for more!! Mike better straighten up his act or Brooke is gonna figure them out... Hhehehehe I almost hope she does, THERE IS SO MUCH CHEMISTRY BETWEEN ERIN AND MIIIIKE
lol I cannot. CANNOT. Wait for more, publish again soon!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you love it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2: Keep it in the closet

OoooooowhoooHoooooo!!!!!!! I love this probably a little too much haha Cant wait to read on! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminal58 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2014 08:53 am Title: Chapter 2: Keep it in the closet

Ooooooowhooo

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 31, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Keep it in the closet

This is funny...



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2014 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2: Keep it in the closet

i felt kinda of mad when he said " Why the hell are you still here?"  and " I love Brooke! I don't love you!!"

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: He meant "Why the hell are you still here?" because he said if her closed his eyes and opened them again it would all be a dream and she was still there reminding him that it wasn't a dream. Don't worry, Michael loves Erin. He just has yet to realize it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2014 05:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Blame it on the alcohol

Mmmm interesting, I love it!



Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Blame it on the alcohol

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue this is an marvelous beginning. i LOVE IT ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response: Thank you!!! I will!!

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