[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
Enjoy the detail about the Native Americans and the smudging - Nice to learn something new.
So…in his absence who is running the company? Hope he does not get ousted in his absence by someone else. Or someone bringing a lawsuit against him, he was a devil for the longest time!?!?!
Look forward to how he deals with the news of his pregnancy - possible baby girl. This could prove a traumatic time for him, dredging up of old memories, especially with Dylan hanging around, making all kinds of waves. Or maybe he will be afraid to tell Seth, in case it happens again - so much to look forward to.
Hope to read more very soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!! Is Michael pregnant now...??? This was such a fascinating chapter. I loved their love letters, the reunion and the purification ceremony.
And as far as Michael's mother is concerned. I'm glad the bitch is dead. I can't believe she did that to him and his father. That was just evil and selfish.
Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
Who is SHE! please update soon I got to know who she is!
Author's Response:
I wonder who the hell is SHE?! Hmmm...I suppose you know it. You'll see, you'll see
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:12 am Title: Chapter 14
Ugh thanks God that you updated this story I was waiting for you Princey... and amazing chap.. ugh those love letters part was beautiful and cutely funny..and oh the last line ... mikey'z preg??? Realy?? Finaly??? YahOoOo....CongratulationS mikey n Sethn u princey...plz update sooon ..... L.O.V.E
Author's Response:
I wonder what you think after reading this chapter. But I see you aware this already ^.^
And there may be a bit more about this issue coming soon. Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 02:01 am Title: Chapter 14
EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Is Michael pregnant??? Is he? Is he? Is he? Is he? Is he?????? Or about to get pregnant??? OMG! This is what i've been waiting for! AAAAAHHHHHH! I can't wait for more! Please, PLEASE send the next chapter soon! I can't wait to see what's next! And how michael reacts! Will he tell Seth? Will he get scared and keep it a secret? TELL ME! AAAAHHHHH i'm dying to know!
Also, i love how in-depth you got with the smudging ceremony. I originally grew up around many Native American reservations, and it's nice that someone else is familiar with their customs and know what they're for. a dear friend of mine is half Caucasian and half Navajo. It was really fascinating for him to teach me about customs of his Native American heritage. You know your stuff! Respect!
Author's Response:
This chapter should answer your question, I hope :))
Thank you for always sticking with me
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
This chapter made me go hyper-emotional. Beautifylly written N structured. Such sweet moments. One word. PERFECT. n as usual, update soon, please. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words cause if my writing can make you feel like you're eating a slice of pie with whipped cream on top.....I know I'm doing something right. :-)
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 13
THAT WAS SO CUTE. XD I LOVED EVERY MOMENT OF IT ESPECIALLY THAT SUPER HOT SEX SCENE. XD IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SEXY, LOL XD. MICHAEL AND SKYLAR ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER, THEY ARE A PERFECT COUPLE THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THEM ARE PRICELESS. XD I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS AWESOME STORY. I'M DEFINITELY GIVING THIS CHAPTER A MUCH DESERVED 10. XD GREAT JOB. XD
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. That really means alot.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 13
Master piece!!...Who do you think your calling a queen? Baby your the king, there's no queen in here. The rest of us we just give it a try, and most of us don't have the courage to admit it, but I do! -cuz I love talent... My respects for such a talented author... What can a I say about the chapter? Only Master piece!! baby I love you... Ten brighting stars for you...
Author's Response:
I'm SO glad you've taken such a liking to this chapter! Thanks for the kind words. The title of King, I have given and taken to Mr. Andrew as well lol, because he deserves it much than I do, and I adored his works actually the same as yours. Of course, You are still My Queen.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
YES!!! FATHER AND SON BACK TOGETHER!!! This part made me cry alil *sniff*
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & reviewing ^.^
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
YES!!! FATHER AND SON BACK TOGETHER!!! This part made me cry alil *sniff*
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading & reviewing ^.^
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 06:38 am Title: Chapter 13
ohh thats such great chap including fight,confession,hot sexy love making and finally emotional meeting with daddy..wow you are genius Prince.....best wishes for mikey and daddy n seth too....for his concerts....love is at its peak....do continue PRINCEY .... L.O.V.E
Author's Response:
Thanks for the wonderful review! it will be emotional....at least that's what I have planned in my head. Lol.
Date: Apr 16, 2014 06:03 am Title: Chapter 13
Such a bitter sweet moment brought tears to my eyes I love this so much I don't want this to be over ...... Update very soon pleasee
Author's Response:
Many Thanks for the review! I'll update soon for you! ;-)
Date: Apr 16, 2014 05:06 am Title: Chapter 13
I just love the relationship dynamic between Michael and Skylar. It really warms my heart.
Keep it coming please! I'm really enjoying this story!
Author's Response:
I SO agree. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: Apr 16, 2014 03:53 am Title: Chapter 13
NOOOOOOOOOO!!! WHY DID YOU END IT HERE?? GAAHHH! He just found his daddy! He's finally gonna get answers! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY??????????!????!!!!?????
but really, EXCELLENT chapter! I seriously thought that after the rounds with Dylan, Seth would confront Michael about the abortion and there was going to be MASSIVE friction, considering michael had the abortion and didn't tell him that Dylan was the reason that he'd gone so long keeping everyone at a distance. But I am glad that Seth was understanding and accepted Michael's answer :)
and I thought that the little date was especially cute! The movie thing - aaawwww!!! And then making love on the cliff overlooking LA. Super smexy and hot and romantic and sweet and endearing....I could go on and on! And then the goodbyes! TOO CUTE!! <3 heeheeheehee! They just couldnt let go of each other! Again: AAAAWWWWW!!!!!!
And then...returning back to his roots. I gotta be honest: I got chills wondering what was going to happen when Michael would get there. So many things were going through my head. Was peter going to remember him? Recognize him? Would he be angry or upset that Michael found him? What if it was the wrong Peter Jackson! Would it all be a mistake? Would the reunion start out great and then blow up? Would michael find out the reason for being told he was dead and become devastated at the answer? Would Peter not want him back? And then reading what you wrote...I got so teared up!! The emotion , the recognition, the MOMENT! AAAAHHHHHHH!! Now I'm DYING to see what happens! X_X
im so glad I make you happy with my reviews! And I'm so excited knowing that you're going to send more!!! I've completely fallen in love with this story!! When are you going to update again ? I know you JUST DID, but I can't help myself! I'm addicted! I can't stop til I get enough!! ...And I CAN'T get enough! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 xoxoxoxo xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
"Wholly mother of cows!!" Hahahahaha! I like your funny review! I greatly appreciate the kind review.Thank you
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2014 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love this story.. i look for updates all the time! I can't wait for next chapter, you are doing a great job my friend!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm uploading the next chapter as soon as possible