Date: Mar 20, 2014 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
OMG I LOVED THAT SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH !!! XD THAT SEX SCENE WAS ONE OF THE HOTTEST SEX SCENES I THINK I'VE READ IN YEARS. XD:):):) THIS STORY HAS EVERYTHING, HOT SEX, GREAT CHEMISTRY, HUMOR, INTRIQUE..ETC. IT'S A DIFINITE WINNER. XD:):):):) I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH. I'M GIVING THIS AWESOME CHAPTER A DEFINITE MUCH DESERVED 10.XD I ABSOLUTELY CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR THE NEXT PART. XD
Author's Response:
Thank you so freaking much! Is it bad that it makes me happy when I make people excited? Oh well, thanks sweetie!
Date: Mar 20, 2014 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
This Chapter was awesome. LOL. Lexi and Darryl are going to torture Michael forever now. This story totally brightened up my day. Thank you cutie pie!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks a lot! Enjoy!
Date: Mar 20, 2014 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! He finally got laid! I just wish it was a smidgen longer. I was all worked up and you stopped...Tease...see you at the next chapter though :)
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I grinned from ear-to-ear through your whole review! XD thanks for making my day!
Date: Mar 20, 2014 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 4
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. XD:):):) JUST WHEN YOU THINK IT COULDN'T GET BETTER IT DOES. IT'S REALLY GOT A FLOW GOING NOW ALSO.XD I JUST LOVE ALL THE CHEMISTRY BETWEEN MICHAEL AND SKYLAR. I THINK THE TWO OF THEM ARE GOING TO REALLY HIT IT OFF WELL. WHAT AN INTERESTING STORT. PLEASE CONTINUE. XD THIS CHAPTER DEFINITELY DESERVES A 10. GREAT JOB.:):):)
Date: Mar 20, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Absolutely. Thanks a bunch, Beautiful!!
Date: Mar 20, 2014 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Alright!! You had me smiling while reading... I'm glad that Michael finally open up to love ...I hope they stay together... Amazingly perfect chapter; I honer You my darling...
Author's Response:
Ahahaha, thank you baby! I'm usually more into writing more plotty, sometimes darker things, but I just wrote this to have fun so I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: Mar 20, 2014 04:42 am Title: Chapter 5
HAHAHAHAHA!! Mike got caught! I wonder how's his expression if he finds that his friends know abt his 'activity' with Skylar hahahaha. You know I can't stop laughing when I read the '……or so he thought.'
ok ok I'll stay tune but promise me you'll update asap :D
ten stars!
Author's Response:
Mwahahaha ... Okay I have to laugh like that when I see the word 'activity. It's a nasty habit. Thanks, it's a pleasure hearing from you again!'.
Date: Mar 19, 2014 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! I'm so glad I found it. I really like reading these types of stories (dominate/submissive characters), I really love Michael and Skylar finally dating XD. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm so flattered and overwhelmed! Thank you....thank you...thank you. =D You give me inspiration to continue! <3
Date: Mar 19, 2014 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
I can't help it. I have completely fallen in love with your story and characters. Not to mention the hot Michael and Native Hawaiian....can't wait to read more
Date: Mar 19, 2014 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
(= I generally stay away from slash stories
But I am SO glad that I read this story.
Consider this story stalked. Lol, I love the nicknameSkylar
Author's Response:
Haha! Welcome to our SLASH story. I so happy you're enjoying it now!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! It makes all my hard work worthwhile
Date: Mar 19, 2014 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start to a story, can't wait to read more!:D
Date: Mar 19, 2014 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Matt you are the best! Love the characters, love the long chapters, love everything so far.
This story totally brightened up my day.
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie!
Date: Mar 19, 2014 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ohh!! My darling this is so exciting,..can't wait to read more..
Author's Response:
Oh my sugar, I appreciate your kind words and that you took the time to read my story again. =D
Much Love
Date: Mar 19, 2014 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter! I especially loved the 'serenade' Soooo funny lol!!!! So happy Michael finally relented and went out with Skylar :)) I can't wait to see where their relationship goes! I love this story, update soon!
you are a great storyteller, I'm sad bleeding souls is gone though, but I understand. Just promise me youll continue to write here because I love reading your stories :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much! I really appreciate your sweet words more than you know...<3 Mwaah
Date: Mar 19, 2014 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4
The story is interesting, i like it. What's Dylan did in the past? Is he a abusive boyfriend?
I'm wait for next chapter,dude. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Yay..thank you. I won't give a hint, you'd better stay tune if you want to know :D