[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
OMG THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!! XD:):):):) THAT WAS AN EXCEPTIONAL SEX SCENE! XD:):):):) GREAT JOB. I LOVED IT. THE END WAS A BIG SURPRISE. NOW THEY FIND OUT THAT THEY ARE FAMILY. WOW I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.XD I HOPE THINGS DON'T GO SOUR BETWEEN THESE TWO. THEY HAD SUCH A GOOD, HOT, AND INTERESTING RELATIONSHIP. I LOVE THEIR CHEMISTRY. GREAT JOB.XD PLEASE CONTINUE. THIS CHAPTER DEFINITELY DESERVES A 10, AWESOME. XD
Author's Response:
LOL...so glad you liked it.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart
Date: Mar 27, 2014 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 7
I finally had the time to seat and give you my review darling... I'm so intrigued by how you have taken the plot, and I can't wait to read more...love for you darling...Ten stars...
Author's Response:
Thank you gorgeous. It makes me happy, everytime I get the review from my queen.
Luv Ya
[Report This]Date: Mar 27, 2014 08:24 am Title: Chapter 7
You already make me shock,satisfied? XD especially when I read the line when Lexi and Dee found Mike NAKED. Do you know, I can't stop laughed and screamed like a crazy when I wondered if I were in Lexi's position, probably I will faint XD whoaaa Seth -I love that name- and Mike had a same father? Oh no...so..is that mean Seth is Mike's brother? :| no no no, you must update asap. Ok?
*love sign*
Author's Response:
Haha....did I??? Whoa..whoa..slow down. It's alright, you can faint :)
I tell you in details on the next chapter about all this drama stuff, so stay tuned.
TQ
Date: Mar 27, 2014 02:03 am Title: Chapter 7
whoa...angst! poor michael! daddy's alive??? oh, shit this has GOT to be getting good!
Nice steamy scenes btw. excellently written!
Author's Response:
O yea...it's unpredictable. hoping the best for Michael that he find his daddy still alive
Thank's a bunch babe
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2014 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Damn... Skylar really knows how to get a man he wants (or so it seems). When the bribe-gifts route doesn't work, charge/confront and pick a lock. That little chat and action brought me so much laughter but what Skylar did after made me go "daammmmnnnn." I think they are both so endearing so I'll be looking forward to more chapters. Thank you, I enjoyed this story a lot and NO..UH AH...DON'T YOU DARE DROP THIS STORY YOUNG MAN!!!!
Author's Response:
okay I won't, thanks for your kind support babe
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2014 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nooooo. What an evil cliff hanger. Pleassee update soon, pleassseee.
I'm telling you, this chapter is amazing, of course I want you to continue this story. Please don't feel that way boy :)
Author's Response:
tank youuuu sweetie
[Report This]Date: Mar 26, 2014 10:17 am Title: Chapter 6
Whoaa finally Mike being Skylar's! i can't say anything you know..this story makes me speechless. Pleaseee my question is, when Dylan will show up? I reaalllyyy curious abt what happened btween mike and dylan in the past. So please explain it in the next chap,ok? I'll stay tuned ;) *love sign*
Author's Response:
hahaha, thank yoooou. Dylan probably will show up soon and I think it will shock you a little bit about what happened on their relationship. So, stay tune 'kay!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 24, 2014 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG!! XD:):):) THAT SCENE WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!XD XD I JUST LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT. SUPER JUICY JUICY STORY. XD I MUST ADMIT I WON'T FORGET THAT HOT SEX SCENE ONE OF THE HOTTEST TRULY THAT I'VE EVER READ AND YES M/M SEX SCENES ARE DEFINITELY THE BEST. XD:):):) PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SIZZILING SUPER HOT STORY. I CAN'T WAIT. XD I GOTTA GIVE THIS CHAP A 10. XD PERFECT SCORE. XD
Author's Response:
Aww..man, it makes you excited huh?! Lol, 'kay, I promise you, I will update soon ;)
Date: Mar 24, 2014 03:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Very nice!
Author's Response:
Thank yooouuu so much!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
And so the fuckery begging hahahahahahhahah. I love it gimme more!! ohhh boy this is getting really good
Can't express how much I love this story! This chapter was SUPER HAWT!! Please update again soon, I seriously can't get enough of it. :)
PS : SURELY WILL EMAIL YOU WITHIN NOW ;-)
Author's Response:
Oh boy, just calm down now and your email....God damn! Lol....
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh!!! M&M chocolate candy Oooh baby... Michael got his candy....That was off the roof supper hot Ufff Ufff!! Ten red hot burning stars for you my freind...
Author's Response:
Oh yeah baby....Mike got the candy cane. Thank yooouuu for your time reading and reviewing. luv ^_*
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Just noticed you updated: soo glaaaadd! Hahahaha...that was HOT HOT HOT raw sex scenes I've ever read. You tell me, we both same found that M&M sex scenes is hotter and sexier than ever.
My hope is for another chapter to follow this one as soon as possible. ;) i'd like to hear the discussion between Michael and Skylar the following morning. it will be hilatious!
i suppose it's clear that these two guys will end up together. but i 'll be enjoying the process of them getting to know each other all the same. to see how this big, sexy and wild Skylar will menage to tame our sharp-tongued protagonist Michael is certanly entertaining!
thanks for sharing... and keep up the good work.
Luv YA!!!
PS: I will send you email a.s.a.p. and wanna ask you some pesonal things
Author's Response:
Their love will grow as time flies, love takes time and need the process too...a little bit of hot sex, probably??
About your request of role playing, so sooorry babe, it's not my thing but hahaha, your email made me giggles. Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
okay... more cold shower required. I don't know why I read this out of order.
Btw, thank you for making 'clear and evident consent' with Mike and Skyler. That's a big pet peeve of mine in erotica when pepople make it kind of rapey. So it's cool that Mike said a clear and obvious 'yeah you can fuck me.' :-)
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Hahaha..cool. Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Mar 23, 2014 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
*takes cold shower* Ahem...
Okay... better now.
Anyways...
WHOA!!!!!!!!!!!! SSSMOKING HOT! I would be totally happy if all these two did was have sex all day. lol
They make a good pair too I think. At his heart, I think Michael just wants someone to be stronger than he is and to keep him real. He's so good at pretending hs doesn't need anyone. He needs to admit to himself that he's wrong. Seth might be the right guy to help him do that.
Author's Response:
Aaaand....You need to take a cold shower?? Gee, I need more than that after wrote this chapter, no shame lol.
Yeah, Skylar is a perfect guy for Michael to keep him real and to lose control more than, 'yeah you can fuck me' thing :)
Thank's a bunch for reading and reviewing
Date: Mar 22, 2014 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god I'm so disappointed I will explain you why :/ ...
I found the story interessting, the character of Michael was perfect, you really know how to write, how to make such girl like me totally in love with Michael, I promise :D I liked the sexual allusions you put in it, I loved the way Michael is actually acting *.*
I've read the first chapter without knowing it was a gay story ( I'm french, I didn't know what M/M story was ) and to my great misfortune i cannot imagine Michael as being gay ( I have no problem with gay and lesbian, I love them ! ) but not Michael, So I stopped reading and that's WHY I am disappointed because your story seemed to be amazing but I had to keep my picture of Michael :)
Though, you're a great writer, I promise and respect your work, hoping your readers to honor you and your story :)
Liana From France
Ps: Don't pay attention to the mistakes if ever there was :)
Author's Response:
Oh excuses moi, mademoiselle.
Je suis désolé que cette histoire vous a fait déçu. Merci pour l'examen :)