Date: Mar 02, 2013 01:17 am Title: Breakfast At Tiffany's Pt. I
Ola made me think about me in this chapter lol. I can't lose control of everything when I'm around of a special person like this lol. Especially, when it's unexpected lol...And if it was Michael...Damned I would have lost everything lol
You know I love this story and I waiting to read about their breakfast :)
Author's Response:
Aw, I'm glad you found her relatable! I myself have had experiences where these exact feelings came about...ah, the joy of blooming love :)) Next chapter coming up soon!
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2013 09:34 am Title: Breakfast At Tiffany's Pt. I
The gif.....The gif......I'm dead.
But I love how awkward she is it's so cute haha
Author's Response:
LMAO I know, I crack up just thinking about it!!
I'm glad you like Ola's character here! that's exactly what I was trying to portray, the awkward in all of us when we see that one person...lol
Date: Feb 18, 2013 11:27 am Title: Shades
I'm so in love with your way of writing. It's so beautiful, you have a real talent. The way you wrote Michael's dream was so touching.
Please keep going :)
Author's Response:
I so deeply appreciate your words, it means a lot to hear that about something I wrote. :) thank you so much and I WILL keep going!:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2013 10:47 pm Title: Shades
Your writing is like poetry. It has this sense of imagery that you crate, because nothing is straight forward and to the point with you. I love it. And when I saw you introduce the first line of that song, I went ballistic;
THAT. IS. MY. SHIT. And I immedeately began singing along. :)
Author's Response:
You like that song too??? This could be the start of a beautiful friendship lol
I giggled at your review, it's funny and sweet at the same time. I'm so glad you like my writing style, it's comments like these that really touch and motivate me. :)))) thank you so so much!
Date: Feb 09, 2013 02:03 am Title: Hours Before
Oooh they're so sweet together...I love how their lovestory grow slowly and they take things slow and it's romantic.
About MJ's song reference, I'm maybe wrong but I thought about the lyrics of "Blood on the dancefloor"..."She got your number, she know your game..."
You know Ola was repeated to herself I have his number and at a moment, she said there's no game...So maybe lol...
Author's Response:
WE HAVE A WINNER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That is exactly what I was referencing! :) haha you got it!!
I want it to be slow so every moment of non-sexual contact holds more electricity than more sexua contact...that idea of the journey being the destination i guess LOL
Thank for the review!
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 06:02 pm Title: Hours Before
Gosh I swear your writing is poetry!! Easy to visualize--soothing to read! I love love love love this story!! Keep up the AMAZING job! ~Much Love
Author's Response:
This may be one of the sweetest reviews I've ever received. I'm so touched and honored (to quote MJ) It's reviews like this that keep me going. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: Feb 08, 2013 09:15 am Title: Hours Before
aawww this so sweet their love is amazing
Author's Response:
thank you:) i'm trying to make it amazing
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2013 07:10 am Title: Hours Before
Amazing as always *-* Sweetness overload! Ola, please call him *-*
I feel stupid but I didn't notice the MJ song reference D: And I read this chapter TWICE!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing I'm so glad you like it!!
Heehee dont feel bad it's kind of a subtle reference....if u want a hint I can send you one lol
Date: Feb 08, 2013 02:16 am Title: Hours Before
omg updaaate! this is getting really intresting!
Author's Response:
Hehe I'm glad you're into it! I'll be updating as soon as I can!:)
Date: Feb 07, 2013 09:07 pm Title: Hours Before
I love you write in small paragraphs...you give just enough detail to make it feel like I can visualize every scene! Love love love! Keep goin!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I do try to put my vision across without overwhelming the reader. But it's a lot of revisions before I get it to publishing status lol
Stay tuned my friend!!:)
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2013 05:00 pm Title: And Cut (Part II)
Aww, this is a sweet story! Chapter five about had me crying. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like it! I'll be sure to update the next chapter soon!:)
Date: Jan 30, 2013 10:25 am Title: And Cut (Part II)
Awwwwwww what a beautiful chapter!!! Girl you're amazing *-*
I laughed so much when he entered Ola's room and found her half naked ahahahahhah their reactions were priceless!
You're one of the best writers here, now I can say it :D
I love Fly Away.
And I can't wait to see how their relationship will progress. <3333
Author's Response:
Aha! You recognized the song I used!!! :) YOU'RE the amazing one!! Thank you so much for you kind words! :)
I was laughing while I wrote that naked part out haha!
Date: Jan 30, 2013 09:13 am Title: And Cut (Part II)
What an amazingly written chapter! I really like it...I was waiting for each Michael's words to Ola and was hanging to each of her reactions.
Can't wait to see all of this will progress now :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was trying to detail every moment before what I knew the readers wanted to see happen LOL
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 09:42 pm Title: And Cut (Part II)
More please thank you!
#GO GO GO!
Author's Response:
I'm working on the next one as we speak!
[Report This]Date: Jan 29, 2013 08:41 pm Title: And Cut (Part II)
Wow I can't wait to see how there relationship progresses through this.
Continue soon! ^_^
Author's Response:
promise i will! :) thanks!