Date: Mar 22, 2016 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1, This is NOT it
I like this story. It's very different than most MJ fanfic I've read. Good job. I look forward to more
Date: Dec 10, 2015 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 6, The Great Escape
I like this story so far!!! I really want to read more.
You've always got some amazing ideas, girl!
Please don't drop this story. I am looking forward for the next chapter. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2015 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6, The Great Escape
Oh my god!!!! This is amazing! I love it! Can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2015 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 6, The Great Escape
Oh my god!!!! This is amazing! I love it! Can't wait for more!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2014 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 6, The Great Escape
more plz!
Date: May 26, 2014 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 5, Insanity
Oh Man I am so in to this
Author's Response:
hehehe, glad to know you like it! :D
Date: May 26, 2014 12:37 am Title: Chapter 5, Insanity
YAY YOU'RE BACK
DUN DUN DUNNNN!
Author's Response:
yaayy!! im back!
*cue dramatic music and lighting in the background* XD
Date: Feb 24, 2014 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 3, Ambush
That was so hard to read....having his children snatched from him while he's right there, and he's physically unable to do anything about it. Poor Michael....this is getting good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
indeed..... it was too very hard to write.... just imagine the pain one has to go through, its terrible.
hehe! thank you very very much! im glad you like the story so far!
Date: Feb 24, 2014 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 2, Lets Begin
Is the bedroom scene new? 'Cause I don't remember reading it... Anyway, Continue uploading! :D
Author's Response:
yep!! as i said before on Da that i was going to re-write most of the chapters. Im going to take out most of the scenes over time in the story and replace them, ut it wont affect the storyline at all ^^
ehehe! thanks! and glad you like the new version!
Date: Feb 24, 2014 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 2, Lets Begin
This is interesting! Like it!
Author's Response:
thank you soo much! im glad you like it! stay tuned for more! ;)
Date: Feb 24, 2014 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1, This is NOT it
DUN DUN DUNNNN!
Darkie, totally knew you were going to post up the 7's! XD
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
*cues dramatic music and lighting* O.O
ehehehehe!! ehhh i guess it seemed the right time to do so i think, but im still re-writing stuff! fffuuuuuuuuu
woman, you must have at least read the whole damn thing by now on Da! LOL! but im still imrpoving the chapters heh
Date: Feb 24, 2014 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 1, This is NOT it
It sounds good and nice start! Continue (:
Author's Response:
thank you! im glad you like it so far ^w^