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Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 10:41 pm Title: Dinner with Michael

She's in looooooove!



Author's Response:

Yes, she definitely has feelings and there's more to come ;)

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2014 02:05 pm Title: The Rivalry Begins

I fuckin hate Alex for no apparent reason... Oh well. Please continue soon!!! I love this!!! :D



Author's Response:

Lol Alex is definitely an interesting character.

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 25, 2014 01:21 pm Title: The Rivalry Begins

Aww, cute little moment between Cat and Michael. Yeah, Alex had better keep his girl close, or else she'll be someone else's. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. :)

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2014 03:18 pm Title: The Next Chapter

Wow Michael really let loose on frank. He definitely does like Cat and I hope frank does not get in the way of that.

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Alex and Cat

She needs to get rid of Alex. he is no good for her. 

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2014 03:13 pm Title: Reunited

Loved their meeting. I can tell that Michael really likes her butt oh no she has a boyfriend and it seems he is very protective if not too protective of her. I dont like him 

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2014 03:11 pm Title: New York

Its going to be interesting to see what happens when they met again. Mr Norton is a cruel man.

Reviewer: MJsBadgirl Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 22, 2014 03:07 pm Title: Prologue

This is nice. I like it. I sense they will be great friends

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2014 01:15 pm Title: Reunited

The meeting! Looks like there are some feelings being stirred up now...interesting.....I just love that nickname he has for her; it is too cute! It's going really good! Keep it up, hon!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2014 06:58 am Title: New York

Uh oh! They're about to meet up again! Can't wait to see it! Doing good, hon!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2014 02:25 pm Title: Prologue

It's very cute. I like what you've got so far...there are a couple of grammatical errors, but nothing major that can't be fixed. Very nice so far. Keep going.



Author's Response:

Thanks :) It took me a while to build up courage to post this story.

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