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Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:16 am Title: Chapter 5

Awe poor pepper. He was alone and bored. But michael seems to like Elaine. Lol. :) I was bored! So I went and destroyed your room. Lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 03:26 am Title: Chapter 5

I love it, it soooo cute! Keep writing plz

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2014 01:06 am Title: Chapter 5

she is so adorable

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 4

AWWW!!!  I knew it!!!  <3

 

Elaine totally is crushing on Michael and he, being a guy, is totally not getting it!  >.<

 

More more more!!  



Author's Response:

Gosh, your guess is true <3 and another chapter It's up now :)

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

<3 <3 <3  Pepper is a major trouble maker!  She may have to learn some manners, but Mike needs to learn some kitten keeping rules lol  Great update! :)

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oooooo intense. Lol.

Reviewer: joliebean Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 10:37 am Title: Chapter 3

hey you better update soon, I f*kin' love this story Xmuach

 

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 07:00 am Title: Chapter 3

she is so adorable

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 06:28 am Title: Chapter 3

That was cute that Kittie reminded me of my Kittie tiger. Aww I miss him.

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2014 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

omg i looooooooooooooooove this story



Author's Response:

glad you like the story

 

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2014 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Omg I am still reeling with cutrness!!

 

Pepper is an adorable name and it looks like she will be an adorable match for t I ugh guy Mike.

 

Kinda wonder if Elain might be flirting just a bit too?? :)

 

please continue! The story is extremely unique as far as its content and I really enjoy reading it :-)



Author's Response:

Lol, yes it is.

Umm..you have to find out more to the next chapter then

 

Thank you once again for your reading and reviewing

 

Reviewer: Isaboricua Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2014 11:53 am Title: Chapter 2

Girl u gotta go on I love the kitten lmfao!!!!



Author's Response:

Absolutely, my dear Isa

I will give you some more then

 

TQ ;^

 

Reviewer: jazii Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2014 08:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Hey, I started reading this last night and have to say that I really like this idea of just Michael and the kitten. I also am enjoyng the simplisticity of your writing style and the way you build your characters. This story is very well put together, please do keep it up. I'm excited to see what you put down for us in the future. :)



Author's Response:

Aww thank you for your time reading and like the idea of this story, your review gave me effort to keep up the next chapter :)

 

Reviewer: kitty101 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 07, 2014 08:11 am Title: Chapter 2

Keep going



Author's Response:

Absolutely dear, your wish is my command

 

Reviewer: Everlast Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2014 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

D'AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

 

SUPERR AMAZING CUTENESS!!!!  *head explodes*

 

I love this part:  ""I remember it clearly. You said, 'I have not slept with more women than Picasso, and I love cats'."


He sucked in a breath to calm himself down. "Elaine...I said 'I love cats', not 'I want a cat'.""

 

So he's a detective in this story?  Does the kitty turh out to be a super sluthe too??

 

<3  Michael Jackson + Kittens = SQUEEE!!!

 

More please!! :-)



Author's Response:

yes, it is, full of cuteness but explode your head sweet heart, lol

the next chapter will be up soon. TQ for reading

 

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