Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 116
"Bill come here now!!!!!
"No Michael please carry me, no Bill.
Hahahahahahaha!!!! Those two lines were just soooo funny!!!
I don't care if people are mad about how this story ended, your writing is so good and very few writers have what you have and can tell a story like you do. I've only seen this only once in a while, and I love the stories even more because of it. I hope you will still continue to write the second part of this story as well as well as your other stories.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 128
The haters may or may not mean it literally but whatever..this was such a good ending to a tragic event and I am looking forward to the sequel..
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your support. I worked hard on the ending and the whole story for that matter. I'll work on the sequel while I struggle through writers block with oil and vinegar.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 115
Wow, like Michael and Mandy said, this has been interesting!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 128
Mann... You should make the next story where Mandy wakes up in the hospital and doesn't remember anything. Her "death' was franks revenge for getting him fired. And MJ and mandys family work to get her to remember. :D just an idea.... :)
Author's Response:
Sorry, Mandy is dead. No silly twist. It's time to move on to a new plot and new loves
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 128
So sad I already know the sequel of this one is going to be just as great as this one, this will stay my favorite story really looking forward for the sequel of this
Author's Response:
Yea it's sad but I had to go out with a bang. Working on sequel. Need to make the first chapter perfect to keep you guys interested.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 114
I loved this chapter.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 113
I think you may have dropped a hint to what the ending of the story may be, but I'm just guessing.
Oh, and forgive my asking, but what is um....sex lube?
Author's Response:
Gel that heats up
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2014 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 128
*pouts* Mandy's not coming back, is she? Meanie. I love you but I hate you too.
Author's Response:
Nope..only in their memories in the next story...new loves for Michael I and more drama.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
This is so sad! You're an amazing writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2014 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 127
I still hate you. There better be some miracle by which Mandy comes back. Or else.
Author's Response:
Could you pleas stop with spreading hate? It's not exactly pleasant to have someone say they hate you especially over fiction. I do have feelings and don't find it funny.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 127
Awww *hugs*
It's beautiful to see you don't just stop after the other chapter but really go on and capture those emotions of grieving proces and different way of how people react on it
Date: Jul 16, 2014 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending
You're welcome
Date: Jul 16, 2014 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 127
So sad and beautiful at same time *tears in my eyes*
Author's Response:
Honestly, I cried writing the last two chapters so you aren't alone
Date: Jul 16, 2014 10:24 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending
Don't listen to haters..I didn't see it coming and find it very sad but I don't hate you in the least..in fact I congratulate you..granted there are endings in other works of fiction that piss me off too..and it's one thing to dislike the event but another one to make it personal which isn't called for..
Author's Response:
Thanks for the encouraging words and your continued support
Date: Jul 16, 2014 09:57 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending
If I have insulted or offend you and your work in any way I do sincerely apologize for as I have no malicious intent against you or your hard work. As I writer I respect you and do truthfully believe that you are an extremely talented writer and I absolutely do so enjoy your work.
Author's Response:
Appology accepted and thank you