Date: Feb 11, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Poor Amanda. I hope she feels better AND that they get found soon. Michael can't lose her just when he found her. More!<3
Author's Response:
more hopefully tomorrow...working on another chapeter of other story. thanks for the review. more to come.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 10.2
Poor Amanda... ;_; and poor Michael too! Having to go through that :( God I hope they find those two sooner rather than later 😭😱😲
I really really love this story!!! So much
Date: Feb 11, 2014 09:33 am Title: Chapter 9.2
sounds like Amanda is in luv..hope the two for them get rescued.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2014 07:29 am Title: Chapter 9.2
AWWWWWWWWWWHHHUUAWWWWWW!!!!!!
That... Was the definition of LOVE people, this story is so amazing!!
I cant wait for more!! Eeeee XD Love it!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2014 03:41 am Title: Chapter 8.2
SOBEAUTIFULBWKDNWKNSLWBDE
and haaawwwwttttt wooo child!!!
Lawrd, that was HOT STUFFFF somebody call Donna Summer mmmpphhh
Ah man, I LOVED THIS!!!
Author's Response:
What is that? Did you get so excited your fingers lost control? Lol
Date: Feb 05, 2014 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 8.2
Amanda is one lucky girl..glad she and Michael are getting along better now
Author's Response:
Getting along is putting it lightly. Lol
Date: Feb 05, 2014 07:56 am Title: Chapter 7.2
Write the making love scenes the way you normally write them as it is R rated after all..
by the way keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2014 05:06 am Title: Chapter 7.2
Ooooo details are always good ;) hahaha
No but seriously. This. Is. Amazing. How do you write like this? Incredible!!!!
Author's Response:
I agree with you. There is a reason why romance novels and 50 shades of grey are so popular. I just wanted to check because I know what I want but it may be off base from what readers want. You may like my other story if you like this one. It's got smut and struggles but it's a fairly complete story of what life with Michael would be really like. I would be curious of your thoughts as I really appreciate you loyalty Thank you. I'm not a writer I just have a wild imagination.
Author's Response:
I agree with you. There is a reason why romance novels and 50 shades of grey are so popular. I just wanted to check because I know what I want but it may be off base from what readers want. You may like my other story if you like this one. It's got smut and struggles but it's a fairly complete story of what life with Michael would be really like. I would be curious of your thoughts as I really appreciate you loyalty Thank you. I'm not a writer I just have a wild imagination.
Date: Feb 04, 2014 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 7.2
Interesting, and unique story. I like it
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 6.2
Oh my god... I cant imagine how terrified they must be...
I feel their pain like its my own
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2014 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
Oh its amazing!! Really keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2014 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5.2
Wow... That was just so beautiful, so at peace...
[Report This]Date: Feb 04, 2014 11:11 am Title: Chapter 4.2
That was intense.... Poor souls
Author's Response:
Thanks for you 5 star rating. I'm trying to not make this your typical mike falls in love story. Hope you enjoy.
Date: Feb 04, 2014 06:02 am Title: Chapter 5.2
Poor Mike..the shoulder injury may be a dislocation..hope he could see a doctor about it soon
Date: Feb 04, 2014 02:42 am Title: Chapter 5.2
You're off to an interesting start, my dear. You do have a lot of run-on sentences, but you're getting your image across, so it's not a big deal to overlook it. If you would like a tip, i would suggest spacing your thoughts out when you write them. slow down; the words aren't going anywhere lol. use a couple of extra sentences to describe something, if you have to. maybe create more of a visual, descriptive picture. now, i understand you probably want to leave as much to the imagination as you can - and there's nothing wrong with that - so if that's the case, all i can suggest is just take a little more time when writing out a scene.
As a whole, though, this is an interesting concept. i like how you've 'humanized' michael in this. i like that you didn't write him as the epitome of perfection (though, i suppose he's the closest thing to it we're ever going to get, lol). i like the interactions and Michael's turmoil. it is a very intriguing story. i hope to see more soon. well done, overall :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the tips. I'll go back and edit. It's hard working between word and the I pad.