Date: Mar 04, 2014 06:57 am Title: Chapter 22.2
"Wow it's all pink and wet. Do guys really put their dicks in there? That must be amazing."
"What if your father hears and comes in? He'll cut my dick off."
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Girl bye....I damn near dropped my cup of apple cider all over this keyboard laughing at school boy Michael.
Date: Mar 03, 2014 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 23.2
Wow. I just wanted to give him a big hug and kiss. Poor baby. Amanda is a good woman and she's the perfect woman for him. She knows how to deal with him in every state, physically and emotionally. She's all the woman he needs. I hope by talking about it he won't regress into a 16 year old anymore. Especially when it's painful like that, poor baby just wanted to be loved and the mattress of Motown didn't do a good job at all. Smh nasty heffa. Anyway, I hope his next character during his high is a fun one again.
Author's Response:
It's funny where my writing takes me. I originally started the chapter with the intention of making a return of the funny 16 yo but it just changed while I wrote it on the plane back from Cali today
thanks always for your comments. I really enjoy reading them. Makes it worth writing.
Date: Mar 03, 2014 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 22.2
Diana? Hmm. She should ask him about that when they wake up.
Author's Response:
That's the plan
Date: Mar 02, 2014 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 22.2
Lmao so damn cute and funny! He turned into the awkward teen. How adorable! He knows he is a mess when he's high. I can't wait to see who he is next. It adds a new flair to role playing. Lol I love it.
Author's Response:
I made a subtle change this morning to the end of their trist.
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2014 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 21.2
Oh gawd! This is gonna be good
Date: Mar 02, 2014 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 21.2
Ooh I hope horny Mike comes back. Lmao he gives me do much damn life when he's high. Amanda is definitely gonna get some. I'm laughing at her parents too. Everybody bout to get some ass I see lmao
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2014 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
I was reading and they were all like grr and ouchie and Mandy was knocked out and she might lose the baby and and and and you went all like "hahahahaha Imma be evil and stop there and wait till next time to tell everyone the results" and that's so mean!!!!
lol
Author's Response:
I gotta keep you hanging to get you to come back. Everyone loves a cliffhanger. At least it's not like tv where you have to wait 6 months. Plus it was getting lat last night :)
Date: Feb 25, 2014 04:12 am Title: Chapter 19.2
You have no idea how hard it is to be laughing so hard you're crying, but not allowed to make any noise or you'll wake your parents and get grounded XD hahahahahaha ooh I love it 'pretty sure mine's bigger' hahahahahaha XD
Date: Feb 23, 2014 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
Poor Michael..shouldn't be picking fights with Joe but Joe was childish too
Date: Feb 23, 2014 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
Oh lucky! Have fun there :)
Ahaha I like him too ;) XD
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2014 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
The whole dick measuring thing XD
Author's Response:
I keep trying to put in some humor which you wouldn't imagine angelic michael to do. Hope you enjoy:)
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2014 06:01 am Title: Chapter 19.2
OHHHH jesus... *facepalm* MICHAAEEELLLLL WHY AHAHAHAHA XDDD
too funny!!!!! Omfg lmao!!
Author's Response:
???? You lost me
[Report This]Date: Feb 21, 2014 06:01 am Title: Chapter 19.2
OHHHH jesus... *facepalm* MICHAAEEELLLLL WHY AHAHAHAHA XDDD
too funny!!!!! Omfg lmao!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 20, 2014 08:22 am Title: Chapter 20.2
HAHAAAAAAAA THEY'RE ENGAGED!!!!!
I'm so happy!!! hehehehehe
Love this! and they were finally reunited with the kids too... :'D
This was amazing!!!! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: Feb 19, 2014 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 20.2
awww the ending is so romantic..and Paris and Prince are so adorable ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I very missed your feedback :)