Date: Jun 04, 2014 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 32.2
I have a tendancy to get immersed in a story and comment at the end, but I had to jump in here. I started reading a few hours ago and have been glued ever since. I'm so glad Michael stood up to the slave-drivers at the studio - they had no right to talk to him like that. They'd be NOTHING without him.
The further into this story I go, the more I reflect on how he must have felt in similar situations in real life, and how people had treated him like shit, stepping all over his feelings and treating him like a machine. It makes me really sad...Michael deserved so much more. He deserved to be happy.
Author's Response:
I look forward to hearing your opinion then. I tried to write it like it was real and who knows how it really was for him. I've been to a seminar on his studio stuff and was shocked that sometimes he didn't have a say in what was on the cd so I took some inspiration from things and also tried to pull from real live you tube stuff and embellished a lot too.
Thanks for reviewing and reading.
[Report This]Date: Jun 04, 2014 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 97
I remember watching YouTube footage of that signing!
Date: Jun 04, 2014 07:14 am Title: Chapter 14.2
I can't believe those bastards put him through that pain just to "help" his career. Makes you wonder just how many lies Michael was told in real life.
Author's Response:
It does make you wonder if crap really happened in real life to protect him. Thanks for reviewing. I look for your opinion on future chapters. I like reading peoples responses.
Date: Jun 04, 2014 07:11 am Title: Chapter 13.2
Oh shit I'm crying now
Author's Response:
I'm sorry...glad it hit a cord though...thanks for reviewing
Date: Jun 04, 2014 06:51 am Title: Chapter 7.2
Hot'n'heavy sex!!!!! Lots of!!!
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story..thanks for reviewing..you've got a lot of reading to do to catch up.
Date: Jun 03, 2014 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 96
Haha omg im laughing I saw that concert as well
Please continue this story I love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I thought her watching the concert would be funny
Date: Jun 03, 2014 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 96
I love this story and absolutely loved the part with the girl on stage. You're an amazing writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. It tried to write that scene how I thought someone would react if that was her man and some woman doing that. I thought it would be a funny scene.
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2014 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 96
Haha I've seen the slut before, can't she just respect a guy's dick, without sucking it?!
Author's Response:
We all hate that woman but also envy her in a secret way.
Date: May 27, 2014 07:22 am Title: Chapter 95
Loving this story
Date: May 26, 2014 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
Lol it's alright! It was funny :3
YOU'RE UPDATING AGAIN?!?!
Well hot diggity dog XD
Author's Response:
I was trying but I'm really struggling with ash.mike. I've painted myself into a corner with them and can't figure out how to get out.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2014 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 95
Okayyyy, I've gone ghost for a while :3
But I just HAVE to point this out because I found it hilarious! XD
You mixed up Amanda's name with Ashleigh's name from your other story, where they were talking about the baby sucking its thumb :3
I just HAD to say that!
Anyway, great chapter, and CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE :D <333
Author's Response:
Oh geesh..I was writng both stories at the same time..I'll fix it thanks
Date: May 26, 2014 06:48 am Title: Chapter 94 squirm
Omg brilliant explanation lol
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was trying to think of what it would be like to talk to a 3 and4 year old
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was trying to think of what it would be like to talk to a 3 and4 year old
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2014 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 94 squirm
That's worse than caught having sex! That's caught fuckig and cumming! Lol! Poor mike and Mandy!
Date: May 25, 2014 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 94 squirm
All I can do is say is oh my goodness..would have locked the door just to be safe..