Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 107 love letter
Wow.......that's....wow....!!!!!!!
Talk about romantic!!!!!!! Daaaaaamn!!!!!! Can I trade places with Mandy in this story? Please....please...pwease?
Hmmmm, seems as if Prince is feeding off of his sister since their both resisting things now, like taking their naps?
Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 106
Hey!!!! I didn't say I wanted singing in every chapter!!!! I was just meaning to remind you that's all!! :))))!!!!
Have you read the book Remember the time yet? I'm planning on getting the audio versions of that book, as well as Jermaine's.
In both of my stories there sure as hell going to be lots of conflict as well as sex!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes I read both. I hate Jermaine and his was self loathing. Remember the time was sad but good.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 106
Your welcome.
So, anyways, I have these two stories I'm working on and not one of them has gotten any reviews. What am I doing rong? I'm not the greatest writer, but I still think I do a pretty good job in coming up with my ideas. Can you please check out my stories?
Was Paris as bad in real life then she is in your story? In the Michael Jackson Living With MJ she didn't seem to be spoiled or do anything that would look like she had Michael rapped around her finger, but then again, you didn't see a lot of his children.
Will you have Mandy really show her who's boss? I think if I were Mandy, I would at some point really need to, "lay down the law". Like I said, in my other review, you sometimes have to pick and choose your battles, but if she does something again, maybe you could put that part in there. Sometimes as a parent, just threatening timeout, or a consiqunce isn't always enough. There are times where your gonna have to act on your threts. I'm not a parent, but I sort of just know these things. But, let me stop talking before I get you pist off at me. :))))!!!!
Author's Response:
It's well known that she was a daddy's girl or at least that's what I've heard. No one really knows except them. Read the new book remember the time and it will give you another view of him and his children Back to Mandy laying down the law she tried when in New York to discipline her but Michael went soft and it turned into a battle. She's not that bad just has a vivid imagination and keeps digging. It's the way I made her. That's the beauty of fiction you can make a character anything you want.
As as for your story, I haven't read it but from what I see on here, suspense and sex sells. When you build a story there needs to be some conflict in them meeting then once they do drag out the sex. The more detailed and smut the more ppl like. Once you get away from sex no one cares. Also the story can't be too sweet or ppl don't like it. Once a story is popular ppl drop off like that. You go from a crapload of reviews to nothing. I call it greedy readers..lol. They want you to write more but can't give you a review in return. I have a story with 25000 reviews and 155 review..100 ppl read it a day but they can't leave a review. The joys of writing. Ghost readers....write because you like to and like your story otherwise you will go crazy trying to please people. Crazy ppl who want you to sing in every chapter...lol. Sorry couldn't resist.
happy reading..gotta go work on the wedding..trying to get it done before I leave tomorrow for LA..gonna be there for Mj week
Date: Jun 19, 2014 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 106
Well this chapter had me laughing!! A lot of sexual talking and teasing going on in this chapter!!!!
If I were Mandy, I would have really done something about Paris and her potty mouth. I know you sometimes have to pick your battles but at some point they really need to address that with her and work on setting some Consequences for things like that. She, like any toddler will test what they can and can't do, but I think she really needs to know who really is the boss. Even though I was laughing like crazy when she said, "ass" that child really needs to have tighter rains around her. She's not a bad kid, but she has her moments.
I can't wait for the wedding though!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I've been in those shoes when kids are saying such inappropriate things and everyone is laughing. Poor Paris in real life...I've really made the poor child into a little handful. It's well known that she had Michael was wrapped around her finger so I tried to introduce that even at three.
thanks for reviewing and I'm glad I could make you laugh.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 106
Loved this chapter and it's so funny the humor you put in there and so glad to see they have such a wonderful bond with Mandy' s family
Author's Response:
I try to throw in some humor and of course naughty talk between those around Michael. I love the thought of him being free to joke and flirt with those near and dear to him.
thanks for the review
Date: Jun 19, 2014 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 105
Oh no sorry, I didn't mean for it to sound like that, I was just reminding you.
Date: Jun 19, 2014 11:49 am Title: Chapter 105
Please continue. Love the flow of the story and how its well written. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Your kind words mean a lot. Working on the wedding.
Date: Jun 16, 2014 09:16 am Title: Chapter 105
Hmmm, there's a lot of emty threts going on around here.....
You changed the dogs name?
And what about the singing from Michael to Mandy/ there unborn baby/ to/ with the children?
Author's Response:
Oops. Wrong dog. Other story
get off the singing fetish I'm not going to put that in every darn chapter
Date: Jun 15, 2014 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 105
Love this story
So cute those parenting moments I love those
Date: Jun 15, 2014 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 104 nightmares
So sweet trying to keep that promise
Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:27 am Title: Chapter 104 nightmares
Mmmmmmmm, I looooooooooove that Michael rocking her in his arms just as much as I love him singing!!!!!
Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:26 am Title: Chapter 104 nightmares
Mmmmmmmm, I looooooooooove that Michael rocking her in his arms just as much as I love him singing!!!!!
Date: Jun 15, 2014 08:19 am Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
Sorry, I just really like singing!!!! Sorry.....
Date: Jun 14, 2014 01:40 am Title: Chapter 103
It's wonderful to see everything is like it should be
Im happy Mandy and Katherine bonded
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2014 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 103
That was good kathermanda bonding time!