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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 09:56 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

Im not getting hateful because that's not who I am I look at the big picture and of course it's really sad but you are the writer you deside what happens

I do understand those others but come on don't be so hateful its a story not a real life thing saying you hate the author that's a personal attack you could have say in a different way like you  wanted a different ending but again it's the writers decision 

By the way looking forward to the sequel of this one and  it still will be my favourite story with or without Mandy because you did a wonderful job hope those hateful reviews wont make you stop writing 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks I appreciate it a lot

Reviewer: lifeofamoonwalkermj7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 09:12 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

but i will always support u even though i really disagree with what you did

Reviewer: lifeofamoonwalkermj7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 09:12 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

i hate you 

michael always used to say he'd be alone and you proved it

killing mandy was the worst thing u could of done. you suck really



Author's Response:

Don't you feel you are being a little hurtful by saying you hate me and I suck?  Please understand I did what I did for a reason.  The story had gone as far as it could and reviews were not worth writing anymore for.  There will be a new story dovetailed off of this one that I hope you will enjoy.  Don't worry he won't be alone.  But seriously. Do you need to be so hateful?  I put a lot of work and personal time into all of my stories and it hurts that people say disrespectful stuff like that.  It's just fiction.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 03:06 am Title: Chapter 125

So cute 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 02:55 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

Thats sad didn't see that coming 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your continued support and not getting so emotionally charged and hateful.  As you can see people have said some pretty mean things to me so I appreciate your reviews

Reviewer: __nikkitoocute__ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

Honestly I don't understand why take this route you had an awesome plot going and could have ended this on a positive and less stressful manner yet you've now chosen a more complicated and complex route that will more likely cause your readers distress wich can ultimately lead to lack of responses and supporters can dissipate.  Im not telling you how to write your stories because I do so thoroughly enjoy work but I'm giving my opinion and hopefully you'll see it as a helpful suggestion



Author's Response:

First of all the way I chose to end this does not diminish the awesomeness of the plot.  It had gone as far as it could and as for leading to lack of responses, i was down to a handful of people reading and reviewing who I thank and appreciate very much.  It takes a lot of work and thought and my own personal time to write over 120 chapters and this story can't go on forever Especially when I take time out of every single day to write a chapter for the readers and the thank you I get is sometimes one review.  I write for the pleasure or it but I also write for those who enjoy the story.   I chose the route I did for a reason and I actually cried when I wrote this chapter because this story has been my favorite story to write but again it had to end.  My helpful suggestion to all readers..if you are reading someone's story then show your appreciation and take the time to review along the way it can make the difference to a story ending or continuing on.  I unlike a lot of writers end a story and don't just stop writing someday.  I think the story through to the end.  Helpful suggestion if you appreciate a writer let them know.  On a side note this story is going to lead to a new story.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

A. I hate you.

B. I hate you!! 

C. I FUCKING HATE YOU!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Umm don't you think that's a bit harsh?

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *cries*

Okay now that I got that out is this the fic you plan to write a follow up to? or is it the other one, Oil and Vinegar..?



Author's Response:

No not oil and vinegar...that's set in the 80s. You will have to wait and see.

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending

Well fuck. There goes my night. Might as well skip to June 25, 2009 and have them meet up in Heaven or some shit. I swear, Michael better not get with Jess. That shit is just wrong. Please update soon. I hope for a happy ending. :)

Author's Response:

I warned everyone the story was ending.  I had to end it this way to be able to move on.  Believe me it pained me kill Mandy literally.  I never thought it would hurt personally so much to write this ending but that shows you how much I loved this story and still do.  Hey at least I didn't just stop writing like a lot of authors do.  Give me some credit. I really put a lot of work into my stories.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 125

D'awwww! That's adorable!!!!!

Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 112

Dang!!!! How did you become so good at writing sex chapters?

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 01:05 am Title: Chapter 124

Gee, I was born during a thunder storm when the power went out... Dad got kicked out of the room for trying to give me a stupid name while mum was in labour... At least mike didn't say something dumb and irritating while Mandy was in labour...

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 124

Its great the way the delivery is described wow 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 124

Poor Mandy..like LouieLlama I've been wondering if this is Blanket she gave birth to

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 124

About frickin time she had that child. Are they gonna call him Blanket? Or nah?

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