Date: Oct 08, 2017 08:54 am Title: Chapter 21
I like the pep talk that she gave him
Author's Response:
Yeah, Cherell is a sweetheart. She really cares for him.
Date: Oct 02, 2017 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm really sad that they're going to be separated but I'm excited to see how they stay in touch with each orher
Author's Response:
Hello new reader! Yes, it is time for their fun to come to an end. But the good news is I have so many other things in store for them. I hope you continue to stick around for the journey and bless me with more feedback as you dive deeper into the story.
Thanks a bunch!
Date: Sep 11, 2017 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 84
Great chapter! I want to talk about Janet and Joe and their sub storyline. I really look forward to the day Joe knocks James out. Is it weird that I want them to end up together?....when she is at least 18 of course.Do you have plans for them?
Author's Response:
Terribly sorry for the late response, but thank you. Like you, I also have a feeling that if Joe ever meets James that won't go over too well. It's not weird for you to want them together at all. We've seen Janet crushing on Joe since she was thirteen and found it adorable. Now that she's becoming of age, we want things to become serious between them. But unfortunately, that's easier said than done. So many obstacles lay in the way of making that happen. But as seasons change, so do people and situations. So we have to see what happens.
More to come soon.
Date: Aug 27, 2017 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 84
I'm still in love with this story and check this site every now and then to see if you updated. So happy to see that you did! I totally think that Cherell is pregnant. Bubbles is attached because he feels an instinct that she's carrying. Michael better make their marriage public soon so I'm gonna strangle him for Cherell! As long as nothing happens between him and Brooke as well, I'll be happy. Continue soon! Fabulous writing as always!
Author's Response:
Thank you girl! So glad you saw the update. I'm trying my best to update as much as I can, but life can get a little demanding at times. I'm actually working on two other stories as well. But another update shouldn't be too far ahead. In the meantime, feel free to check out my newest story, Set Me Free. I think you might like it.
Thanks again for your support itsvoodoo!
Date: Aug 27, 2017 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 84
Wonderful story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Much more to come soon!
Date: Aug 17, 2017 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 84
Oh... Oh my GOODNESS!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Riiight! Lol
Date: Aug 17, 2017 11:06 am Title: Chapter 84
Oh I am so glad you updated on this story again! I was going crazy! I'm glad Michael is going to let everyone know that he's married soon. That secret was causing a big strain for them. Oh, I had a feeling that Cherell could be pregnant! I can't wait to see what they find out! Happiness to Marlon and Carol, too! As always, I loved it and I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
It's about time Michael compromises with Cherell because she is seriously not feeling this secret thing. As for the possibility of pregnancy, we have to wait and see. Either way, it's exciting! Marol and Carol are beautiful together. I will update as soon as I can. Things just get a little challenging since I'm writing three stories at once. So, please pray to Jesus that I make it through lol!
Date: Aug 16, 2017 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 41
Noooooooo! :'(
Author's Response:
Lol I'm sorry if I disappointed you. I removed the content for spiritual reasons, but I do hope you still enjoy the story. There will still be tasteful intimate moments between them. Chemistry is very important to me and there will still be lots of it. 😊
Date: Aug 16, 2017 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 41
Wait a minute did I miss something? Reading other reviews it seems like something intimate happened between Michael and Cherrell but I didn't read that part? Has some of the content been removed?
You have got me hooked on this story girl. I can't miss any of the good stuff ;)
Author's Response:
Welcome aboard, new reader! Don't be alarmed but I've sort of cleaned up the story a bit. They didn't have sex but in the original version I did have them be intimate in a different way. But you didn't miss anything important, I promise lol. Thank you so much for following the story. Please continue to feel free to Bless me with more of your awesome feedback as the story progresses.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 41
New reader here and I love this story!!
Date: Aug 16, 2017 12:59 am Title: Chapter 84
New reader here. I'm really enjoying this story but I cannot handle these cliff hangers, sis! I can't wait for your next update
Author's Response:
Lol cliff hangers are so much fun though! I'm so glad you found the story. There's much more to come and I hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thanks for reading!
Date: Aug 15, 2017 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 84
Finally all caught up! I was reading this on another sight, I love it! Ooh. Me thinkth that Cheryl is pregnant! Especially with the way Bubbles was clinging to her!
I dont blame Cheryl for leaving for 3 days. How could it be a good thing to have your husband go to an awards show with another woman!
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
She could be. We'll know for sure during the next chapter. I've sort of fell off with updating regularly on MJJ-legion but I'm glad you've discovered it on both sites.
And I don't blame Cherell for leaving either. Michael really needs to get a clue. Hopefully, I can update again in about two weeks.
Date: Aug 15, 2017 03:26 am Title: Chapter 84
Sadly you didn't hear the loud 'thank God' I said when I saw Joe and yasmine weren't together that means Janet still has a chance! Lool. But I'm glad Marlon found love and another wedding is in the works. Micheal telling her he would buy more snakes had me cackling along and I still don't get how he doesn't like dogs? He has all those huge animals oh mike lol. I hope she's pregnant again. Great chapter <3
Author's Response:
Lol nobody really wants Joe and Yasmine together. Their chemistry isn't genuine. And there's no telling what animal Michael will buy next. He only seems to like the exotic kind. And it looks like we may find out what's really going on with Cherell. Thanks for the love, Lorry. Hope your writing is still going well.
Date: Aug 15, 2017 01:15 am Title: Chapter 84
I'm glad you're back! Bubbles is feeling the baby in Cherell. I had that theory even before the pregnancy test. Can't wait for what's next!!
Author's Response:
That's a good theory. Hmm...guess we'll find out soon enough 😊. More on the way. Thanks for your constant reviewing.
Date: Aug 14, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 84
I was thinking that Bubbles might've been acting that way because he could feel that Cherell was pregnant. Especially with her craving. Good for Marlon and Carol. They're perfect for each other. I'M SO EXCITED!!! I HOPE CHERELL IS PREGNANT AND THAT IT'S A BOY OMG!!! Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
That's a good theory you have there. Bubbles sure is acting strange all of a sudden. Guess we have to wait and see. Lol I love how excited you are. As for Marlon and Carol, they really are perfect for each other. Another wedding is on the way!
More to come soon. As always, I love your reviews, LouieLlama!