[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 33
no oh my god no, holy crabs!!!!! oh my gooooodness this is so intense - (awesome chapter as always) lmao this is a given with my reviews
Author's Response:
I know right? Hopefully they come out of this okay. And I absolutely love your awesome reviews :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 30
momma jackson oh my gooodnessss, i love her so much
Author's Response:
Lol got to love his mother. She's so sweet :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my gosh the last part!! My heart, dude my heart is about to burst this is so adorable
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much! This was one of my favorite scenes to write. So glad you're enjoying the story. I hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 05:34 am Title: Chapter 28
oh my goodness, this chapter made me laugh and cry at the same time! so good, can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response:
I had fun writing the ending of this chapter when Joe hung up in Michael's face lol. MJ better have a good explanation because Cherell is pretty pissed.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 04:55 am Title: Chapter 25
jealous mikey is a hotttt mikey
Author's Response:
I absolutely agree. Jealous Mikey is sexy lol.
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 04:41 am Title: Chapter 23
aweeee, she said it!!! so freaking cuteee. go away thomas lmaoo, loving this story so much
Author's Response:
Yes she did! She finally woman up and went for it. Now Michael is all love struck before the show lol. Thomas needs to move around for real. So glad you've fallen in love with the story :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 03:58 am Title: Chapter 18
noooo, my babies
Author's Response:
Lol it's sad to see them part ways :(
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2016 01:00 am Title: Chapter 15
I think that LaToya is just being a protective big sister and I appreciate that. But Cherell is a sweet soul and I hope that they eventually become friends
Author's Response:
LaToya is very protective. She don't play when it comes to any of her siblings, especially Michael. Cherell really is good people but it may take LaToya a minute to realize that.
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2016 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 14
he's so beautiful oml
loved this chapter, amazing as always xx
Author's Response:
So glad you're still enjoying and following the story! This chapter was super long because I couldn't stop writing lol. So I'm glad you didn't find it too boring or too much lol. Can't wait to get more feedback from you as the story goes on :)
Date: May 21, 2016 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6
Amazing chapter!! x
Author's Response:
Hey there new reader! So glad you found the story and that you're enjoying it. This was one of my favorite scenes to write because I love capturing Michael with his charming innocence. I surly do hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thanks again for reading :)
Date: May 20, 2016 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 73
Loved it cute chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Much, much more to come soon. Glad your still following the story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Much, much more to come soon. Glad your still following the story :)
Date: May 18, 2016 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 73
Please write more. I can't wait to read more chapters...
Author's Response:
Yes ma'am! More is underway. So glad you're still following the story :)
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 73
*sigh* still too short for my starved mind l, but I completely understand Cherrlls concern about being hidden and yet at the same I agree with mj as well with the secrecy they can at least have some privacy to themselves but also the cramping part had me a little worried I thought if she was pregnant she had misscarried I hope I'm wrong! But overall another short but cute chapter! 😘
Author's Response:
Lol still too short for you? Sorry Lorry. I tried to make it a pretty decent length. But Cherell does have a point about the secret marriage being an unhealthy thing. But Michael also has his reasons for keeping things the way they are. Hopefully things will work out for them. As for her stomach pain...I wonder what that's about😕
Date: Apr 20, 2016 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 72
Aahhhhhhhh! I LOVE it! 😍
Date: Apr 15, 2016 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 72
Sorry for your loss.
Great update! I was upset it was the last, I planned on reading this all weekend :-(