[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 74
Honestly, I was suspecting something like this to happen, but I wasn't ready for it! It's so sad. I hope they're able to have a child soon. They deserve one after this. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, this was pretty heartbreaking. Hopefully they can bounce back pretty soon. Michael was right about them needing time to heal together. Working on the next update as we speak ;)
Date: Aug 23, 2016 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 74
I'm crying tears of hot that this story is back and tears of sadness for their miscarriage. I know they'll bounce back, but still... Fantastic writing as always!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you, BluJayWay! It's good seeing your wonderful reviews again. Things are pretty bleak for them right now but I have faith in them. More to come very, very soon 😊.
Date: Aug 22, 2016 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 74
That's so tragic! But the end is still beautiful because of their love and they'll work on healing now. I'm glad you've update! Maybe you should do an interlude back to present Cherell and Michael after reliving this memory? Thank you. Yeah, Michael and Cherell are hurting pretty badly right now but hopefully they can bounce back pretty soon. And thanks for the suggestion about the interlude. I did once think about going back and forth from the flashback to present tense but then a few readers expressed that they really enjoyed the constant flashback. So I'm thinking about just going back to present tense in the end of the story, especially since I'm already this deep into it. But I think I will have Michael and Cherell make some comments about the miscarriage when they're talking with Oprah in the end. Great suggestion :)
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2016 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 74
Whyyyyyyyy! You just had to make the new update a sad one! Those poor souls reminds me of when I did it in one of my stories this similar scene...great minds think alike Eh? Poor things I believe they will have another child soon and this will only strengthen their love and grow more as more stuff hits em as mj gets more famous with the upcoming trails they will face. Sad but great update hun <3
Author's Response:
Lol I know Lorry. I finally give you an update and it's a tragic one. Sorry about that. But it does feel good to be back. Can't wait to finally hop back on reading your stories as well. Thanks for the support as alway :)
Date: Aug 19, 2016 01:12 am Title: Chapter 73
It's official, you are now my favorite author! You write so beautifully! I hope you will continue with this story soon! ;)
Author's Response: Hey new reader! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews and faithful readership. I'm honored :) Life has been pretty hectic lately but more updates are underway. Actually working on the next one as we speak. I'll try to have it up asap. I can't wait to get more beautiful feedback from you as the story progresses. Thanks again.
Date: Aug 18, 2016 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 51
Best wedding arrangements ever!
Date: Aug 18, 2016 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 50
That. Was. Hot!!! I need a cold shower now!
Date: Aug 18, 2016 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 49
Oh, man! I am loving this! That ring is so beautiful!
Date: Aug 18, 2016 12:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, poor thing! They are so sweet!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2016 06:04 am Title: Chapter 73
OMG I can't wait till you update this is the best I series I have read. The dialogue is so realistic and I love how you also included the supporting character lives as well. Thanks so much
Author's Response:
So glad you fell in love with the story. I'm shooting for my next update to be up sometime on Monday so please keep your fingers crossed. Thanks again for your readership and will love to get more feedback from you in the future :)
Date: Jun 03, 2016 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 73
Oh my God oh my go oh my God.... is cherell pregnant!! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Author's Response: Lol I love how enthused you are! If she is pregnant, Michael would be beyond overjoyed. I guess we have to wait and see. More to come as soon as I can. Thank you so much for your awesome readership :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2016 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 73
Omgggg - I hope she's pregnant!!
Author's Response: Michael would be so happy! We should know what's really going on with her soon enough.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2016 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 48
So. I THINK HE'S GONNA PROPOSE...
(I know I'm late in this story but it's still fun to predict lol)
Author's Response:
Lol you have to wait and see. There's just no telling what Michael is up to lol.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 11:23 am Title: Chapter 29
Wow Michaels confession...was the crazy stalker thing actually kind of a true story? I remember reading about it somewhere.
Author's Response:
Sorry for my super late response.Yes, this part if the story was inspired by the stalker he had in real life. I exaggerated on a few things but the girl really did eventually end up in a psychiatric ward for a bit.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2016 10:09 am Title: Chapter 27
What theee fuuuck...