Date: Aug 28, 2016 06:38 am Title: Chapter 66
She might be pregnant
Date: Aug 27, 2016 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 54
He definitly thought she was pregnant.
Author's Response:
Lol yes he did.
Date: Aug 27, 2016 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 49
I had a feeling this was going to happen, it's so cute
Author's Response:
Wow! You're catching up fast! Lol yeah it really didn't come off that much as a surprise, except for Cherell. Now their lives can officially start together. So glad you're enjoying the story :)
Date: Aug 27, 2016 11:44 am Title: Chapter 75
Poor things! That song was very sweet! Michael's right he shouldn't leave her now. They need to heal. Maybe gradually working on their intimacy will help. Small stuff first, like holding hands, embrace, a kiss. Let them get used to each other again. I hope to see more really soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yes they do. These things take time and Hopefully they'll soon figure out what they need to do. And yes, much more to come soon. Thank you as always for reading, waterlily91! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2016 01:27 am Title: Chapter 30
Oh wow, what a way to break it to her.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. Things are getting a little intense now. Yikes!
Date: Aug 26, 2016 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 75
The only thing that will heal them is time. It's a good sign that she's feeling the desire so it won't be long (at least I hope not). My goodness you know how to write one hell of a story!
Author's Response: Yes, time and patience with one another is what's going heal them. Cherell's body has made it clear that she's physically ready so hopefully her emotional state will get better soon. Thanks again for your undying love for this story, BluJayWay :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 26, 2016 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 23
First I love yous, great so far.
Date: Aug 26, 2016 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 75
I hope everything will go good between them after what has happened. But overall this story is amazing I love it, keep it up â¤ï¸ðŸ˜Š
Author's Response: Same here. Hopefully, time will heal all wounds. Thanks for the love. I'll be sure to update soon ;)
Date: Aug 26, 2016 04:32 am Title: Chapter 9
First kiss :)))
Date: Aug 26, 2016 03:12 am Title: Chapter 75
They may need some counseling in groups with other couples that have experienced the same type of loss.
Author's Response:
You might be right. Seeking advice from an outside source could help. But hopefully they can work things out on their own. It's obvious that they still love each other. They just seem to need a little push to get their intimacy started again.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
They're so cute
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe my baby is not ugly :(
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2016 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 75
No! They're growing apart! I think they need to spend some time together. Do the things they used to do. Then eventually, make love again. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
I agree. They really need to fix whatever is broken between them. It seems pretty smart of Michael to cancel his plans to go on tour. They need to be together.
Date: Aug 25, 2016 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awweeee , love it so far !
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking an interest in my story. Hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses :)
Date: Aug 25, 2016 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 75
They need counseling. This is a very traumatic experience for them they both are feeling this difficult tumultuous pain so they should definitely because maybe that could help them get back on track to where they used to be. This was a really great chapter it was sad though the song part had me in tears.
Author's Response:
Counseling may be a good idea. They definitely need something to help them feel the void in there relationship. The song was a little heartbreaking but that's how Michael expresses himself the best. Thanks for the awesome feedback, as always.