Date: Sep 27, 2016 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yasss so original â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
Hello new reader! So glad you found my story and liking it so far. I hope you'll continue to bless me with more feedback as the story progresses. Thanks :)
Date: Sep 23, 2016 09:11 am Title: Chapter 49
Wow that was beautiful, and even more vivid since I went back to look at the actual footage of Katherine's birthday party. My goodness I almost cried myself! I'm so happy!
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was truly a special night. Michael planned it well. I'm glad you were so moved by it. And there are many more special moments yet to come.
Date: Sep 22, 2016 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 39
What a beautiful and romantic chapter. Especially during Lady in my life was playing. Ugh.. to be that lucky girl...
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2016 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 27
I've been reading your story in the past few days and am really loving it. I love your writing style it is very descriptive and makes you feel riht there with the characters.
That being said, what is wrong with Michael =( everything was going so well. Cherell must be crushed, I'M crushed lol! on to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hello there! So glad you're enjoying the story. Your readership means a lot. It's pretty messed up how Michael's being all shady all of a sudden. He better have a good explanation too! I can't wait to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thank you so much!
Date: Sep 19, 2016 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 77
Yay... Loved this!
Author's Response:
Thanks! More to come soon. As always, I appreciate your loyalty to this story :)
Date: Sep 17, 2016 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 77
Honey, seeing a new update from you brings me so much joy! Janet says she's moved one and yet that song of hers says otherwise. She's taking it to a whole new level. I loved the cabin and woods scene. Goofing around only to get scared by a real coyote! I laughed at that! I'm so glad Cherell and Michael are finally connecting physically again, they need each other more than ever. Please update again soon!
Author's Response:
Lol thank you! What you feel when I update is probably what I feel when I get great reviews like yours lol. So glad my story thrills you so much. Janet is being so childish but she's still pretty caught up in her emotions. After all, she's been crushing on Joe for almost four years now. Therefore, it may take her a while to figure out how to properly handle this. The camping trid did wonders for Michael and Cherell. Thank God! Lol Marlon and Tito had to bring their horror movie to a halt once they all heard that coyote. It was pretty comical how they all reacted. Much more to come soon and thank you again for your beautiful readership.
Date: Sep 17, 2016 08:32 am Title: Chapter 25
Woah, ok, Mike. He was jealous, but he has no reason to be 😅
Author's Response:
Cherell is learning quick that Michael is easily jealous, regardless if his reason is justifiable or not lol. But Michael will put a claim on his woman anytime, anyplace, anywhere! Btw, sorry for the delayed response. I don't have WIFI at home so I can't jump on here as much as I would like to. But please know that I adore every last one of your reviews and I do hope you continue to bless me with more of your feedback as you delve further into my story. Thanks again :)
Date: Sep 17, 2016 08:00 am Title: Chapter 24
Such a cute chapter. Yes, Michael put his heart and soul into his craft. I Remember that "Jackie old" from the triumph tour video 😂
Date: Sep 16, 2016 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 77
Aww back to being lovebirds I love it! Random question, but where does cherell's family live?
Author's Response:
Yup they've finally rekindled their intimacy. Cherell's family live in Houston, Texas. So they don't exactly see her very often, which sometimes makes things even harder for Cherell.
Date: Sep 16, 2016 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a cute chapter I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey, new reader! So glad you decided to jump in! I hope you continue to enjoy it and bless me with more feedback as the story progresses. Thanks :)
Date: Sep 16, 2016 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Lol it's cute that Michael is jealous. Janet and the family are all beautiful.
Date: Sep 16, 2016 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awww, they're too sweet. Michael definitely likes Cherell...
Date: Sep 16, 2016 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's understandable why he's soo protective over Cherell.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! And you ain't see nothing yet ;)
Date: Sep 16, 2016 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, this is cute :)
Author's Response:
Hey new reader! Thanks! I hope you continue to stick around. There is so much in store ;)
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2016 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 77
Yes girl!!! I'm loving these updates!!! I'm glad Michael and Cherell are finally good again. I missed them. That camping trip was just what they needed. And Janet is so petty lol. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yes! They've finally fixed what was broken between them. It's ashame all this had to happen so early in their marriage but they're a pretty strong couple. By the grace of God, there's nothing these two can't overcome :) And Janet really is being so immature. Maybe she'll grow out of that soon enough. More to come soon :)