[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2016 04:44 am Title: Chapter 78
Yeeessss!!!!! I love when you update, girl! Let me get this out there, Joseph's a hoe, Enid is a hoe, and Janet's being a little hoeish too lol. Love these updates girl. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Lol you're too funny! Joseph and Enid both have some serious problems. As for Janet, she better have a GOOD explanation. She's so lucky that Cherell decided to save her behind from getting caught. Wonder what's going to happen next. Thanks for your constant support, LouieLlama!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2016 04:09 am Title: Chapter 78
Well damn alot happened once more! I knew Janet was snickering like I mentioned two chapters ago. I still think it's debrage! Lol but mj isn't going to be happy when he hears about IF cherell can keep it away from him but I doubt it. Also Joseph is a prick as usual nothing nice about him smh. Besides that the Jackson family drama is way to high glad Cherell got out of it who wants to involved? I certainly don't lol. Awesome chapter as always and just right about to keep me satisfied lol.
Author's Response:
There's always a lot going on in Jackson home lol. If it's not one thing, it's another. And you were right about Janet. Guess we have to wait and see who this mystery fellow is. She has some serious explaining to do. So glad this chapter met your satisfaction. And keep on writing. I'm still very proud of you.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 03:38 am Title: Chapter 78
Oh bravo! I thought Cherell handled herself pretty well against Joseph. Way to go! I hope we get a chapter that involves the Motown 25 performance! Not to mention, I think Janet is using this guy to get over Joe and prove she's not a little kid now. I eagerly await your next update! God bless you and your amazing talent!
Author's Response:
Yeah Cherell is getting better and better with the way she handles her father-in-law. The Motown 25 was a great performance, wasn't it? And as for Janet, she's being a little naughty right now but Cherell is going to set her straight bright and early the next day. You're so sweet. Thank you so much for the kind words.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 78
Great story...thanks for the update...can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Sorry for the delay. But there's so much more to come. Thank you so much for reading.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
I still love this story, it feels so real!
Author's Response:
Thank you. So glad you're thoroughly enjoying it. More to come soon.
Date: Oct 18, 2016 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Just discovered this story and it is so cute! I love Michael and Cherell's relationship! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, new reader! So glad you decided to jump in. I hope you'll continue to stick around see how they grow and develop. Would love to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thanks agaikn for reading :)
Date: Oct 16, 2016 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 77
Hope you're okay since we haven't heard from you in a month. I was thinking, when Michael and Cherell have kids wouldn't it be awesome if they had a set of twins, too? Like the first child could be a boy and the next time they have twins. Just a thought! ;)
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for checking in. I'm okay. Been working crazy hours at my job which causes me to do nothing but sleep when I'm finally home. Terribly sorry for keeping you all waiting. The next chapter is in production. Should be up soon. And your suggestion is very much possible. It is very, very likely that Cherell could have twins one day. Guess we just have to see what happens. I'll be back soon with an update. Promise :)
Date: Oct 11, 2016 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 50
Now this was a very realistic and original love scene! I absolutely loved the detail you put into it without being raunchy and tacky. The words and descriptions you use are exquisite and may cause your readers to take a cold shower LOL I've already gotten this far in a matter of days! I'm reading this once I get out of work and being lazy at home. Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! This was one of my favorite scenes to write. I wanted to make their first time as special as possible. I wanted it to be many things: romantic, slightly funny, and erotic but not smutty. I thrilled you've enjoyed it and every other chapter so far. You'll be all caught up in no time lol. Your readership is beautiful. Thanks a million!
Date: Oct 10, 2016 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 16
This story is just wonderful! I'm loving it so far! Their kiss towards the end was felt so real. You really have talent in writing in detail. I'm hooked and will be continuing. :)
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2016 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, only just finished the first chapter, love it so much.
Author's Response:
Hey new reader! Thanks for jumping in. I do hope you stick around for so much more and bless me with more feedback as the story progresses. Thank you so much for the kind words :)
Date: Oct 04, 2016 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing! You definitely have a new reader! I'm not quite caught up just yet but I'm definitely working towards it :) awesome job on the writing!
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much for the support. You are very kind. Take your time with catching up lol. I'm just happy you're enjoying it. I do hope to get more feedback from you though as you dive deeper into the story. Thanks again :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2016 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
I love they're chemistry♥ï¸
Author's Response:
Thanks new reader. So glad you decided to give my story a chance. I hope you continue to enjoy it and bless me with more feedback as the story progresses. Thanks again for reading :)
Date: Sep 28, 2016 09:02 am Title: Chapter 77
I'm finally all caught up in your story and I. LOVE. IT.!! The connection btw these two is just incredible and I truly love your writing style, I can imagine the scenes so vividly, and it really adds feeling when Michael and Cherell are about to get together, the way he stares at her... ugh!
I'm so happy to see that they have fully reunited physically and mentally, they are back on track and the camping trip was perfect to help them do that.
As for Janet, I can't wait to see what you have in store for her. Very much looking forward to your next update!!
Author's Response:
Yay! So glad you're all caught up and fell in love with the story. It means the world to me :) Yes, Michael and Cherell are finally getting back on track. And Janet has sent her message to Yaz loud and clear lol. There's so much more to come that you don't want to miss. I hope I continue to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thank you so much for your beautiful readership. God Bless :)
Date: Sep 27, 2016 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love the chemistry so much! It's so adorable and innocent ☺ï¸