[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 11:16 am Title: Chapter 79
Motown 25! Yes, that is what I am talking about! I have watched that performance for too many times and I'm so excited to see the story goes there. I do want to see the story giving more details about how the success of Thriller is changing the life of Michael and Cherell. I know the change could be scary to them and could negatively affect their life, and I want to see how they manage everything that comes from the success of thriller.
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 05:33 am Title: Chapter 79
I love the interaction between husband and wife. It feels like this is real-life Michael sometimes. Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 03:54 am Title: Chapter 79
I still think she met that debarge boy and looks like her first time wasn't made with love at all. I feel he's using her innocence whoever she's going out with trying to get over Joe besides cherell is right Joe doesn't deserve all of the treatment I hope Janet can forgive him kne day. but rest of the chapter was so adorable the Jackson men are arrogant smh. but I can't wait to read Motown 25 I think I have the CD I got with thriller 25 in 09 somewhere might just watch it when you get to the part. the chapter length wasn't too bad lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 03:07 am Title: Chapter 79
Yay! This was a great filler before we see Motown 25! I don't care what she says, Janet is just using that guy to get over Joe. I hope you found the show on YouTube. I'll try to hold in my eagerness for your next update! :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2016 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 78
I'm really just waiting for this story to be updated again lol. I really love the sweet alone time moments between Michael and Cherell. They're so cute.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks girl! I truly don't mean to keep you all waiting like this but I'm almost done with a filler chapter. Just a little something to keep y'all entertained while I work on a much bigger and special chapter. Thanks a milion for your loyalty.
Date: Nov 30, 2016 05:39 am Title: Chapter 1
You don't need to get Motown DVDs. It's on YouTube. Just type Motown 25: Yesterday, Today & Forever! I saw it!
Author's Response:
Wow! I figured MJ's performance would definitely be on YouTube but not the entire concert. I'll be sure to check that out. Thanks!
Date: Nov 28, 2016 11:57 am Title: Chapter 78
Hey, girl! Hope you're doing alright. Since we haven't heard from you in over a month I thought I would check on you. :)
Author's Response:
Aww thanks for checking in! I haven't forgotten about the story. I've actually been trying to get the Motown 25 DVD so that I'll be able to recap the magical event accurately. Since I wanted to incorporate that in the next chapter, I have to wait until I get it. I may just have to get it on Amazon though. I hate to keep you all waiting like this and I really do appreciate the checkups. Thanks again :)
Date: Nov 19, 2016 02:15 am Title: Chapter 16
I love how their dynamic changes and they get more bold with every kiss.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah lol. Soon it'll get harder for Michael and Cherell to keep their hands off each other. Their progression is slow but very efficient. Thanks again for reading and your awesome feedback. I hope to get more from you as the story goes on :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2016 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really like this chapter. Especially the interactions between the brothers and michael and cherells dynamic.
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you're enjoying the story. There's so much more to come so I hope you stay tuned :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2016 06:57 am Title: Chapter 78
I know the story did not elaborate on how successful Thriller was, and I understand that instead of spending time discribing something every Moonwalker already knows, it makes more sense to talk about the life of MJ and Cherwell. However, I do hope the next chapter can talk about MJ's Motown performance. It was so iconic and I really want to see from Cherell's prospective how amazing it was!
Author's Response:
Lol I know what you mean. Don't worry. I'll do my best to recapture the magic.
Date: Nov 15, 2016 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 78
I need to mention how much I love for style of writing Michael and his relationship. It really is beautiful and super realistic. As a JanFan, I thank you for including Janet but that girl had me shaking my head in this one. I hope it isnt that Debrage boy. I just watching him talk about her on tv last night. He definitely wasnt a good look. I kind of wish she would have simply waited for Joe. I know it isnt realistic but it would have been so sweet.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm a big JanFan too and it's such a shame she couldn't be with Joe. James DeBarge wasn't really Janet's best decision. Let's pray that Janet knows what she is doing with this mystery fellow right now lol. So glad you've fallen in love with the story :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2016 07:29 am Title: Chapter 23
I have only finished this section so far but I already find the story beautiful and refreshing. Young love in a slow burn is always one of my favorites. I've read quite some MJ stories filled with screaming relationships and tears, and this one is so different. I really love how the story is going and I hope things won't get too tough on Michael and Cherell.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. Michael and Cherell have their ups and downs but they push through. No relationship is perfect but luckiky these two are determined to always keep their love alive. Your review is beautiful. I hope to get more from you as the story progresses. Thanks again :)
Date: Oct 27, 2016 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 78
All caught up! Your writing is fantastic and I just love Michael and Cherell's relationship! I'm thinking Janet is getting with the guy she secretly married in real life at the age of 18? Or this is just a random guy she is experimenting with? And Motown 25!! Wooo!!! We know what comes from that! Joseph needs to sit his ass down somewhere and leave Michael alone. Very realistic with how you're writing their relationship though! Looking forward to your next update :)
Author's Response:
Yay! You're all caught up! You caught up fast too lol. Thank you girl. So glad you fell in love with the story. Janet has some serious explaining to do. Needless to say that Cherell is not happy with her. And Motown25 will definitely be an exciting time. Joseph is such a jerk that he doesn't even realize when he's coming off as one. Smh. You're too kind. Thank you again. Much more to come soon.
Date: Oct 24, 2016 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 78
Took me a day and a half but I re-read the whole thing! Up to the newest chapter! Loved it! Cherell and Michael are very much in love!
Author's Response:
Hey there! So glad you're all caught up and enjoyed it. There is definitely much more coming soon. And yes, Michael and Cherell are very much in love. Hopefully, their future trials and tribulations will only make them stronger.
Date: Oct 19, 2016 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 78
Beautiful update. Now, what's the tea on Janet?! I can't wait for the next one :-D
Author's Response:
Apparently, Janet isn't as innocent as we thought. Best believe Cherell is going to get on her about that too lol. Good to hear from you, as always, BluJayWay! More to come soon :)