[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 04:31 am Title: Chapter 81
I kneeeew it! Didn't I tell you she was dating that debarge boy?! I told u soo! *cough* I had to get that out of system oh Janet she isn't doing the right thing and I don't blame the brothers wanting to lay it on him I'm surprised Joseph hasn't tried it yet. Hopefully mj won't be hard on him lol, fingers crossed she still gets with Joe later on in the story. Either way the performance was brilliant and that hoe housing her way in is going to cause trouble with Jackie and his wife. Cherell shouldn't even say a word let Jackie find his own trouble and focus on herself and mj. Brilliant chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Lol looks like you were right all along, Lorry. Janet has gotten involved with James Debarge and her brothers aren't having it. Wondering what Michael is going to do.
Date: Jan 11, 2017 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 80
Girl, I just love your writing! This was such a great chapter! Can't wait for more! Michael and Cherell are relationship goals, for real!
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly! Michael and Cherell can be pretty mushy sometimes lol. But that's what happens when you're in love ðŸ˜. So much more to come soon.
Date: Jan 09, 2017 10:36 am Title: Chapter 80
Glad to see this back in rotation! What a scene!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl! You rock! Still waiting on both your stories too ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2017 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 80
Omg I love Michael and Cherell casually flirting with each other, as if they're not married. They're the cutest things ever. I was suprised that Joseph actually helped Cherell. Maybe he's getting used to her. I love when you update this story, but I'm still waiting on Lurking in the Dark, too. Lol but take your time if it means the chapters keep coming out this fantastic. Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Those two can barely keep their eyes off each other, or their hands lol. Cherell was pretty surprised by Joseph's random act of kindness too. Relieved but definitely surprised. No telling what's going on inside that man's head. Much more to come soon. As for Lurking in the Dark, it's kind of a long story why that one hasn't been updated yet. Let's just say I've been experiencing some internal conflict with that one. Sorry about the inconvenience but I feel like this issue will be resolved really soon. I'm still very grateful for your undying loyalty.God Bless
Date: Jan 07, 2017 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Isn't Janet still underaged. I can't help but feel that is what's holding Joe back. I imagine when she's older, and they are both single, maybe Control Era, they will hook up. OmG how dare you stop it right before Motown 25 and the legendary moonwalk. I absolutely love your writing. Please update soon
Author's Response:
Janet just made seventeen. So yeah, she's still underage. Joe has always been protective and cared for Janet. But now that's she's getting older, it's very much possible that his feelings for her could evolve and become more complex. Lol sorry for stopping it like that. I wanted to put the whole show in this chapter but it was already too long without it lol. I'll try my best not to disappoint in the upcoming chapter. Thank you, as always, for reading.
[Report This]Date: Jan 07, 2017 02:14 am Title: Chapter 80
I don't agree with mj hiding her but at the same time I don't blame him doing that for her safety. Joe needs to sit down smh Janet is grown and now he wants to say his own input?? Hell no. But who knows what she's thinking Janet she might be using the guy as a rebound to get over him (still think it's debarge) lol. Either way she's going to be dazzled by his performance she will know what that glove is for soon lol.
Author's Response:
MJ can be really annoying with his over protective ways. Cherell' s trying her best to comply but she's not sure how long they can (or should) keep this up. And her twin is being that typical guy who's showing unnecessary concern about things that don't concern him lol. As for who Janet is dating, only time will tell 😉. This performance is going to be something special so stay time. Thank you. Lorry. Hope you're doing well and enjoyed yout holidays.
Date: Jan 06, 2017 11:00 am Title: Chapter 80
What an amazing chapter! I feel bad for the security man, but I'm really excited for Cherrell's reaction to MJs Motown 25 performance. Thanks for updating, can't wait for more 😄
Author's Response:
Thanks! Cherell kind of felt sorry him too. But he was wrong for assuming and not trying to hear her out. Aside from that, Cherell should have a great time. More to come soon and thanks for your faithful reviews. You're awesome!
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2017 08:55 am Title: Chapter 80
Now that he's heard Janet has a boyfriend Joe is interested? How male. Interesting that Joseph would be the one to help Cherell out; maybe he's finally warming up to her. Oh the moments between Cherell and Michael were so sweet! I think I got a cavity from reading them! I'm glad you were able to update. I was worried something was wrong. I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and New Year! I can't wait for the performance and for Michael to explain the sparkly glove.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Sorry I didn't respond to your last review. The show on YouTube was terrible quality so I just ended up ordering it from Amazon. I've been watching it pretty regularly too lol. Thank you for the recommendation though. And Joe is being very typical. He most likely doesn't understand why he's so worked about it. Michael and Cherell are always at it. Never afraid to act on their love.
You're very sweet. I had a wonderful Christmas and New Year. I hope yours was amazing as well. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2017 03:49 am Title: Chapter 80
Awwwww such a tease!! Motown 25 is finally here and I CANNOT wait to see Cherell's view of Michael's performance! Please please please give us another chapter soon! I became a fan of Michael when I watched my first MJ video, which is Motown 25! It is always very special to me and I am so happy to see it happening in the story. On a side note, interesting that Joseph was acting nice to Cherell. I always have a very complicated feeling towards Joseph given everything that happened in real life, but he is Michael's father and I actually am happy to see Joseph coming around and forming a reasonable relationship with Michael. I hope Cherell will continue to have good effect on the father-son relationship.
But, seriously, I cannot wait any longer! I am so eager to see Motown 25!
Author's Response:
I promise I didn't mean to tease you lol. I had every intention of putting the whole show in this one chapter but it was already too long by the time I was about to write it. Sorry girl. I'll try my best not to disappoint with the next one. Also, I know how you feel. Motown 25 was an awesome event. I ordered it from Amazon and have been watching it pretty constantly lol.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2017 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 79
Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and welcome aboard! Just posted the next chapter and I hope you continue to enjoy the story and bless me with more feedback as the story progresses. Thanks again :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2017 08:58 am Title: Chapter 75
I felt that one. Very good😇
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2017 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 33
Hi, loving the story!! I was so engrossed that i actuallyed gasped when randy didn't steer the car out of the way. Quickly pressing next.... xx
Date: Dec 10, 2016 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awwww I love Cherell and Michael relationship!!! Puppy Love
Date: Dec 09, 2016 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 79
What. A. Tease! Loved reading in though :-D
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 79
Wow. I'm actually really suprised that Janet had sex with him. I'm a little disappointed in her too. I'm glad she actually listened to what Cherell had to say. Cherell is such a good person! I love how she has a good relationship with all of Michael's siblings. As I've said before, I love the cute moments Michael and Cherell have and how they're not afraid to be affectionate with each other around other people. I was just imagining Michael sweaty and in sweat pants and a t-shirt and ooh Lord. lol Please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Terribly sorry for the late response. Janet is doing a little too much. Thank God Cherell is trying to look out for her. She's good people.And I'm a little envious of her and Michael's relationship too lol. They're truly blessed. Just posted the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it :)