[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 82
Good decision Michael lol. I'd be pissed too!
Author's Response:
Lol I would be too. Michael is smart because he knows he needs to always keep his woman happy. Smart move!
Date: Apr 18, 2017 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 82
YAAAAAASSSSS, you're back!
Author's Response:
Feels good to be back. I got super excited when I saw your update a few weeks ago lol. Keep writing that awesome story.
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 06:45 am Title: Chapter 82
Oh this is brilliant! Perfect timing too! I needed this after a long night of work! You know just what I need! I can't believe that guy James said that to Michael! The fact that she's with a guy like that is proof that she's using him to get over Joe. Once again Diana shows what a diva she is. Still can't believe Michael can still be blind to that though. I can see the secrecy thing is starting to cause a strain but I'm glad Michael made the right choice to go with his wife. Beautiful as always!!
Author's Response:
Yay! So glad this made your night better. James was so rude and it would have served him right if Michael had hit him. And poor Michael is so starstruck by Diana that he can't find her guilty of any sin. And you're right , the secret marriage really is starting to affect them. I sure hope Michael and Cherell are strong enough to get through it. Thanks a bunch for your awesome readership. More to come soon, preferably in about two weeks.
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 06:27 am Title: Chapter 82
Michael is such a good husband!!! He always knows how to make Cherell feel better. I'm glad he chose to ride with her. And James was being hella disrespectful. You don't say things like that in front of your girlfriend's brother!!! I love what Cherell told Michael to make him stop being mad. Updates every other week sound pretty good to me!!! Lol please continue soon!!!
Author's Response:
Michael is a smart man lol. Not only does he want to keep Cherell safe but he wants to keep her happy. As for James, that was so not cool. He knew better. And Cherell knows how to handle her man. I will try my best to keep my updates on time. Thanks a million for the undying support.
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2017 03:24 am Title: Chapter 82
Finally you update, girl don't say you'll update every other week update. Update when it's best for you! Lol
Back to the chapter...Great I don't like James debarge in this story one bit you don't say those kind of things to your girls siblings he needs soap down his throat for his arrogance! I was irritated just the same as mj geez. And his brothers just a mess as always and that drama with Diana and Mary was good but as always mj sees Diana as if she spit out the moon and stars from her eyes typical. The arguments between them about her being hidden are always creeping up I don't blame cherell at all and I'm just glad mj somehow changed his mind to sit with her in the car that should soften her mood lol.
Author's Response:
Lorry! I feel like I haven't chatted with you in forever. Hope you're still doing well with your writing. Still very proud of you. I really want to become more faithful with my updates so I'm shooting for every other week. (Wish me luck with that lol).
As for the chapter, James had some nerve, didn't he? And Diana can never do wrong in MJ's eyes. Poor Michael and Cherell just keep going at the same argument. This just shows you how big of a deal this is. Doesn't look like this secrecy is going to be a permanent thing. Love your reviews, as always. Also, I think it's finally time for me to check out some more of your stuff.
Date: Apr 16, 2017 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 73
Love this story keep it up 🙌ðŸ½ðŸ™ŒðŸ½
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Much more to come soon. So stay tuned 😋
Date: Apr 08, 2017 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 81
Have you been alright these past months? You haven't been on here for awhile now. Just concerned, not trying to sound impatient.
Author's Response:
Hey! I've been working on a few other projects but this story hasn't been forgotten. Just updated last night and I'm going to try my best to post a new chapter every other week. Bare with me lol. I really appreciate your faithful readership. Sorry for concerning you.
Date: Mar 26, 2017 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oml he's wearing the bracletðŸ˜
Author's Response:
Michael is a sweetheart ðŸ˜
[Report This]Date: Mar 19, 2017 06:12 am Title: Chapter 81
Oh God I hate to chase for a next chapter and I am certainly not acting as a bitch, but please, I really would like to see more :)
Author's Response:
Terribly sorry for the wait. The next chapter is still in production. I'll have it up as soon as I can. And don't worry. You're definitely not coming off rude in any way. You're passionate about the story and you want more. I understand and I'm flattered by that. I don't ever mean to keep you all waiting this long. Sometimes I get too caught up in my work life and other projects. But it'll be up soon. Thanks for checking in for it 😊
Date: Mar 03, 2017 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 6
The relationship they have going is so cute
Date: Mar 03, 2017 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter. This time between then is perfect and not rushed
Date: Mar 03, 2017 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
Kinda wish there was more dialogue between MJ and. Cherell, although it was cute whenot Michael got jealous
Date: Mar 03, 2017 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
They are so adorable. I can't even, his smile (:
[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2017 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Cherell areally so cute. Michael is so sweet and flirty. This is a great chapter of how they meet
Date: Mar 03, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
The flashback was amazing. Had me fangirling the whole time
Author's Response: Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. More to come soon.