[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
what can I say more than: they are so hot together, perfect couple!! now Im waiting for them to finally do a little more than teasing each other and being interrupted ^^
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
wow that fan scared me, at one point I thought she fell. im glad to see how much Michael can take from Chris, this really makes it hard for him to not be around Chris (which is good) XD
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 7
:O first if all, that little moment Chris and Michael had there was extremely hot. I love relationship stories in which Michael takes the submissive role, its just freaking hot right?!
I hope when he gets together with jackie he will realize that she probably just like any other woman and who he really needs is Chris. i want him to need chris XD
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
they are finally getting close and ending with a cliffhanger I need to read on!!!l i'm so happy Chris could convince Michael to at least try and figure out what's going on between them :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 09:42 am Title: Chapter 5
wooooow!!! omg that chapter was incredible! i honestly would not have thought Michael would make such a move on Chris but it was nice to see that he felt very strongly towards Chris even when Chris doesn't seduce him I guess because here Michael really did do the things out of his own will. not to mention that it was really hot and Chris should totally run after him and snatch him in the hotel room^^
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 09:13 am Title: Chapter 4
oh I love them so much already, the way Chris seems to know Michael without him even having to explain himself is adorable. all the different emotions that Michael feels and are entertwined probably need to be loosened and untangled by Chris. i love this!
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:56 am Title: Chapter 3
well I can really understand how Michael needs Chris right now and it is obvious that also Chris beeds him because Chris seems like a guy who is very protective and caring and I feel like the complete each other very much, only Michael needs to realize that and I hope he will soon.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2
i'm so glad Michael went to Chris and I see how he is totally understanding of the situation with the same the loneliness and everything like that. I hope you didn't put anything in his drink though because that would probably thro Michael off if you found out.but right now I really think Chris is a nice and genuine guy who will only do Michael good.
[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2015 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I have always seen your story on here and I've always wondered what it was about and I must admit I'd read some steamy scenes before and I thought they were really good.I don't know why it took me so long to get started on the story but now I'm definitely starting and I promise you to review every chapter.so this one since it was the first one I'veread in context I loved it very very much I love your writing style it could easily be a published book and I love the way you portray Michael how you create the person of Chris in such a distinguished way even though he didn't do much yet on the first date so I'm really really intrigued by the story and I'm definitely going to continue reading it. I hope Michael will visit Chris in his hotel room and talk about his feelings and experience something new he seems like he's up for it and also that he really needs it.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2015 09:05 pm Title: Epilogue
Great! I loved it so much! I started reading this last night and couldn't stop! Best one I've read so far :)
Author's Response:
lol I'm so glad you enjoyed it! <3 I have another one in progress "Janus I have loved". You might like that if you just finished this. *hugs* THank u for reading!!! <3
Date: Dec 31, 2014 01:17 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL! You tell her, Everlast!
very pathetic, indeed. This is why I have boycotted so many writers and stories. I don't necessarily have a problem with them; just the fact that they continuously consist of the same thing: Michael meets girl, Michael falls in love with girl, poof they live happy ever after. Oh, and he's homophobic. Not to mention all the hetero writers seem to know Michael MUCH better than any of the rest of us...
Please.
None of us know how Michael would react to a story like yours. In my opinion, he'd probably appreciate it more than anything; you've shown him to be more human than many people want to admit to. And he fell in love with someone who cherished him deeply almost to a fault. As far as we know, what you've written may have been the closest thing to true love he's ever had. Besides, I saw it as a VERY realistic possibility; it's not like Michael woke up one day and suddenly found out that he's gay. Labels aside, love is love - who cares if it's with the opposite sex or not. I'm sure, under the right circumstances, someone like a "Chris Hanson/Ellace" would have captured Michael's heart just by loving him. What people don't realize is that sex has very little to do with love; it just happens to be a bonus. I'm very confidant that Michael understood that. He knew a type of unconditional love that very few understand - and that's one of the reasons why he was labeled a freak, sadly. The world is ignorant and full of hate.
I'm glad you put haters in their place. I can't stand bashers, especially when you warn them of what the story consists of and to stay away if they don't like it, and yet they still troll. I don't understand why people feel the need to hunt down people and things they don't like just to shove their opinions in other people's faces. The way I see it, if you find you don't like something, move on; don't waste yours and other people's time by making yourself look like an ignorant jerk.
keep doing your thing, girlfriend; for every person who doesn't appreciate you, there's tons more who do! <3
Author's Response:
<3 thank you! I appreciate the support. :-) I don't think you make a very good point that I think Michael Jackson knew about what unconditional love was and was not. Love doesn't have anything at all to do with sex, not in the way that Hollywood in society try to tell us that it does. It's completely possible to be in love with someone before you have any sexual attraction to them at all. I have no idea what Michael Jackson sexual orientation was. Primarily because I never had the opportunity to sleep with him. Which means it's none of my business. Lol but I think that writing stories gives the opportunity to let people enjoy a story that features someone that they admire and care about. I've been so glad to have you as a faithful reader! I can't wait to start posting the next story. :-)
*hugs* you rock !
Date: Dec 30, 2014 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm sorry but as a dedicated Mj fan this is so uncomfortable to put Michael in a gay situation is uncomfortable cuz he was never gay in real life I Noe its fictional but still no of fence to the GLC but I mean come on...but I do refuse to read this but just wanted to say something on it ...I Noe if Michael read this hed feel embarrassed and uncomfortable to in a way...
Author's Response:
You know...
I am going to leave this comment up.
I was going to delete it.
But I think that all the LGBT members of the MJ community should see this. So should all the other members.
Fan fiction is just that: fiction. It is fantasy. It isn't meant to reflect reality. Regardless of what his sexual and gender dentity may or may not have been, there are gay men who find michael jackson very attractive. it's really nice to see you supporting your LGBT community brothers and sisters in the fandom by implying that only heterosexual women are allowed to be the featured love interest for a fanfic.
I'm also glad to know that you feel you have such an insight into Michael Jackson's head that you know what his personal emotions about something like this would be.
I tend to think that he probably chooses not to read fanfiction at all, because most of it is embarrassing. He'd probably be less offended by this then by the endless stories featuring him falling in love with girls who turned 18 day before yesterday.
I'd like to also add that I am a member of the LGBT community myself. And I feel uncomfortable reading heterosexual stories that feature Michael. I don't hate on them, but I don't enjoy them either. So please take note that you will not find a single place where I have left a comment about how it made me feel uncomfortable or how I didn't think that's the way he would react.
And let me add, just in case someone criticizes me, don't try to tell me you're a member of his family or knew him personally. Because if you're a member of his family and you've got a screen name like you're using, then you really need to reconsider your life choices.
Date: Dec 30, 2014 02:14 pm Title: ~*~*~ NEW STORY TEASER #3 ~*~*~
WHO? Who, indeed? GAAAAHHHH! The suspense is killing me!!! Whats going on, here????
Is it the first yet??? I CANNOT WAIT!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2014 10:04 pm Title: ~*~*~ NEW STORY TEASER #3 ~*~*~
Luckily the 1st is just around the corner, I really can't wait to see what you have in store! From the teasers I can tell it'll have me totally hooked. I have so many questions!! But what is going on with Michael??!? I'll count down the days ;))
[Report This]Date: Dec 23, 2014 06:02 am Title: ~*~*~ NEW STORY TEASER #3 ~*~*~
These new teasers are so intriguing!!! let's wait for January 1 :) :) :D