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Date: Jan 18, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Video Girl

EHH HEEHHH EHHHHH HE WANTS TO MARRY HER
I had a squealing fit when I read that!! CAN HURRY UP AND MAKE THEM GET MARRIED?! Ahahahaha!!
This damn story. Oh my god its PERFECT.
Please never end it!!! XD Publish again soon!!

Author's Response:

Maybe he'll propose soon...or maybe it'll be a while.

i will publish again soon. i took a long break and sometimes these chapters take a long time to write. i'll update as fast as i can

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Date: Jan 09, 2014 09:01 pm Title: Teaching Classes

IZZOBEAUTIFUL
ohhhh I love ittt Mike can you possible be ANY sweeter??

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Date: Jan 09, 2014 08:56 pm Title: The Next Day...

Finally!! Alone XD Ahahaha that whole ordeal was hilarious!!!
I for one cant WAIT to see how the video shoots gonna go down :D

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Date: Jan 09, 2014 08:54 pm Title: End of the Winter Vacation

Oh god those poor people XD Well... I suppose "poor" isnt an accurate word, they "got to stay at Michael Jackson's house!!!"
XDD The blond one gets me everytime xD
I love this storyyyy

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Date: Jan 06, 2014 08:20 pm Title: Red Velvet

I cant wait for more of this cuteness!!!

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Date: Jan 06, 2014 08:19 pm Title: The Jackson 3...Plus Janet

They so AAAREE SO CUTE

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Date: Jan 05, 2014 07:23 pm Title: Aspen

DAAAMMMMNNN whooo thats hot 0_o
Those two should be voted most adorable couple!!! GAHHH thur so cuh-YUUUUUTE!!!
Cant wait for more!!

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Date: Jan 05, 2014 07:17 pm Title: Winter Vacation

Talk about hilARIOUS omfg XDDD the tears are real people
AAAHAHAHAHHA the scene on the plane lmfaooo way too funny!!!!! I died laughing!!

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Date: Jan 05, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Travel Plans

AWWWW HAHAH he kisses her and they go "EEEWWWWW" xDDDD too funny ahaha
This story.
This amazing wonderful story that is a sequel to another amazing wonderful story :) :) :)
Cant wait to see about asspeeenn!! Nice of Jan and Erms to take those two!

Author's Response:

Lol them going EWWWW is just totally something that a brother and sister would do, right?

Glad you liked this chapter and you like this story so far. Aspen will of course be filled with lots of sibling rivalry and bickering....and love ;)

 

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Date: Jan 03, 2014 11:46 am Title: Un-Decorating Never Land

Wouldnt that be convenient? Just want to see a movie on a whim; go out to your backyard! Ahahaha xD
I loooove love love love love loooove this story, its awesooome!!!

Author's Response:

I know right? I wish i had a movie theater in my backyard XD

I'm so glad you love it. More will be on the way soon!

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Date: Jan 03, 2014 11:38 am Title: Red Velvet

OH EM GEE baking, black eyed peas, sex... Amazing in my books ;)
I love this to bits so far!

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