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Date: Jan 26, 2014 03:27 pm Title: His First Love

AWWWWWWWWWUAWWWWNFOWNSPANSKW
So she finally met miss Ross :3
LOVE IT!!!

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Date: Jan 22, 2014 03:38 pm Title: This Passion Burns Inside Of Me

That... Was about the BEST sex scene I've ever read. 0_o holy crap, so intimate!! I loved it, as always! You never fail to amaze me with your skill...

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Date: Jan 21, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Do You Want To Build A Snowman?

HAHAhahahhaaaa probably was Mac's resolution... XD
Too cute!! And the last part, "Forever and always"
Beautiful!!

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Date: Jan 21, 2014 05:30 pm Title: Do You Want To Build A Snowman?

I saw Frozen it was so good!!! ♥ the story by the way!



Author's Response:

Good! I was hoping someone would get the reference in the title! XD

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 05:35 pm Title: Perfect Day For A Joy Ride

I loved this to death!!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 05:35 pm Title: Everyday Create Your History

That was I think the most beautiful thing I've ever read... And believe me, I've read my fair share.
This chapter was truly inspiring, and motivating... And it makes me so proud to know Michael did performances like this that were MORE than performances, they were history.

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 03:11 pm Title: Most People Take Saturday's Off...

I WANT TO SEE THAT MOVIEEE XD I'm jealous hahaha

That. was. adorable.

Ohmygod How cute was that??!?! Well the part where Mike was laughing when she was shrieking XDDD

I love this!!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 03:03 pm Title: Back At The Dance Company

Ohhhh Mike's in for it!! XD That was cute!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 11:38 am Title: Life Is A Roller Coaster

Oh I would have loved a video for butterflies as well... That would be gorgeous!!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 11:37 am Title: Life Is A Roller Coaster

Oh I would have loved a video for butterflies as well... That would be gorgeous!!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 10:11 am Title: Photo Shoot Time

HAHAHAHA MICHAEL "I saw my life flashing before my eyes, I thought I was dead for a moment"
SUCH A DRAMA QUEEN 😂😂😂
I loved this!!!! Best story ever haha!!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 10:05 am Title: Super Fun Rehearsal

HAHA a sexy horny perfectionist... Thats mike summed up!! I loved this chapter!!! XD

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Date: Jan 19, 2014 07:43 pm Title: Buying Out The Mall

Holy crap Janet... Gosh, she takes pleasure in being a bit of a bitch in this doesnt she? XD
I cant imagine stealing from Michael, even the thought makes me sick :(
I LOVE THIS

Author's Response:

Well they're brother and sister and siblings steal from each other (trust me, i go through it all the time). They're just rich so they do it in the extreme XD

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Date: Jan 19, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Beauty Lies Inside and Out

THAT WAS BEAUTIFULLLLL that little speech she gave... Le sigh that was amazing!!
I love the way you write this!! You're an incredible author, I cant wait for more!!

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Date: Jan 19, 2014 05:15 am Title: You Give Me Butterflies

Oh my damnnnn boy is too hot!!
I loved the part where michael taught her to cry, that was so intimate

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