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Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2014 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 5 MYSTERY REVEALED

aww this was such a sweet chapter

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2014 11:54 am Title: Chapter 4 HE HURT YOU

hope the bruises don't hinder her efforts..

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2014 11:38 am Title: Chapter 3 A GLIMMER OF HOPE

Come to think of it I would have the same doubts she did about returning if I were in her shoes

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2014 10:49 am Title: Chapter 2 GUARDED IDENTITY

Hope Cassie gets to patch things up with Michael or his kicking her out didn't make her be like "well fine, be that way" and not help him anymore

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2014 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

I like this so far.,.poor Michael..his back hurts..

if you don't mind me asking, which Era is this set in?

P.S. Got some fics up if you feel like reading something.



Author's Response:

2006  glad you like it thanks for the review.  Makes it worth writing when people comment..I'll check urs out

Reviewer: jruby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2014 09:21 am Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

she uses pixie dust to get past security......

Reviewer: Massilovesmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 19, 2014 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 49 MICHAEL MICHAEL MICHAEL

OMG I love this story , please write more , I'm so curious of what next! ^^

Reviewer: jruby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2014 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

Is it really twin babies??  Gosh that's exciting news. 



Author's Response:

Yes.  Not sure the sex of them yet..will have to wait and find out.  I have to think it through as I have a tendancy to paint myself in a corner sometimes with my writing...:)  Hope you enjoy.   Thanks for the comment

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 16, 2014 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 44 BRANDON

Awh Brandon :(

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

My pleasure...it's a great story! :)

 

Oh, he was very funny! I hate to reference the Bashir documentary but have you seen the scene where the blonde girl wants to get in his car and asks if she can give him a hug and he kind of mumbles: "I'll give you more than a hug"? That and the videos in his limo when he went back to visit Gary, IN in 2003 and all the women are running and surrounding them and he's points out hot chicks and even comments on one girl whose "titties" are bouncing. I almost died hearing Michael Jackson using that word! LOL



Author's Response:

I love when they spray his crotch with cologne and he says that it already smells good down there and too much it will burn. Or when he says get your ass to the house. 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 31 A PLACE TO CALL HOME

I'm glad they found somewhere to live...assuming Emily agrees. The story with her husband is sad. :(

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 09:23 am Title: Chapter 30 CHANGE IN PLANS

Lol the end of this chapter was funny. I hope they can continue to hide from the press in Florida.



Author's Response:

I've read that Michael was very funny with friends so I have to throw in humor when I can.  I can only imagine what he would be like its all a shot in the dark :)

 

Thanks for your loyal support and reviews.  I love reading them

Reviewer: misskish30 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2014 09:38 am Title: Chapter 29 PLAYING TOURIST

I really enjoy this story I like how free Michael is I wish he had that in real life just because he was a star didn't mean that he couldn't enjoy the regular things in life.

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2014 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 29 PLAYING TOURIST

Aww, I'm so glad Ryan and Katie hit it off! I have to admit, even though I obviously wanted Michael and Cassie together, I was feeling kinda bad for Ryan. :p



Author's Response:

I couldnt leave Ryan hanging out there afterall without him M & C wouldnt have met. 

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 28 A TIME FOR CHANGE

I don't think Michael was capable of looking anything BUT sexy! ;)

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