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Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 07:47 am Title: Chapter 78 Going home

Hope Michael gets the help he needs..being out of Cassie's life is understandable but suicide isn't the way out

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:59 am Title: Chapter 77 Punishing blows

 

Biting the insides of my cheeks so I don't cry



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dont do that you'll get a canker sore

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2014 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 77 Punishing blows

And again the violins are playing for Michael. He really wants somebody to pity his ass huh? Well I'm sure as hell not. He needs to stop being a bitch and man up to what he did. All this self loathing and woe is me shit is truly tired. Now Cassie is gonna take her simple ass home and baby him too huh? Just like clockwork. Lmao they both are completely pathetic. Cassie with her no backbone having ass, and Michael with his sorry ass. A mess. I'm not mad at Ryan for reacting the way he did because that's what most men would do if they were told something crazy like that about someone they care deeply for. Ryan should apologize but keep it moving though. Michael isn't worth the excess pity and ass kissing. 

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2014 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 77 Punishing blows

I would definitely agree Michael should be handling this better than he is. I mean, I would much rather a person feel sorry for what they did than to handle it the way most people do these days and feel good about hurting someone and then write a song about it. But nearly killing yourself wont help either. He needs to forgive himself, if Cassie leaves, he did what he could to fix it and then it would be time to move on and do better. Cassie does have some thinking to do. Maturity is always the best way to handle a situation, especially this one. 


:D I'm so happy Bri is well and I hope Michael doesn't leave her cause her and Brandon will need him. Some affair should never come between a father and his children.

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2014 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 75

I feel it's only normal for Michael to have a hard time forgiving himself as it shows he is truly sorry for his actions and not just sorry Cassie found out.there's a way to handle it though I could see him punishing himself by being distant from most everyone.no affections, no sex, no nothing..

however I get the pattern you're using for him when angry with himself

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 76

Uh oh! I hope  dr young *cough* slutbag *cough* hasn't done anything to Cassie!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 76

Uh oh! I hope  dr young *cough* slutbag *cough* hasn't done anything to Cassie!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 76

Uh oh! I hope  dr young *cough* slutbag *cough* hasn't done anything to Cassie!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 76

Smh at that bitch showing up! As if Cassie needs more stress. God I could just kill Michael. Cassie and him wouldn't need to avoid that bitch had he kept his ass at home and kept his dick in his pants. I'm so annoyed with his ass. Cassie is only gonna get more angry and feel resentment because she keeps the shit bottled in like it's ok. It's NOT ok. Your husband cheated, your child is sick, and he wants somebody to feel sorry for his ass. Please. I hope Cassie is alright though, and hopefully the meds will work and cute that sweet little baby. I would love to put my foot up Michael's ass and that Dr. Young bitch. Smh 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 76

Wow michaels an emotional wreck, always overreacting and mad and stuff, hopefully those two love birds get their affairs straightened out. I'm glad the baby doesn't have leukemia, that would have been a nightmare. 

I can't wait for your update. Btw you should read my story ;)

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 75

Yea things are getting worse, but I doubt this all happening just because of an affair. There are people out there who have done worse than cheat once. He's just confused and scared so of course he'll blame himself for everything, when eveything is not his fault. But I hope over time he comes to let it go, as well as Cassie.

I hope Bri is alright. With her parents being in an emotional state right now. I agree with Michael, their focus should be on getting her well.



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Thanks for the positive feedback/review

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2014 02:13 am Title: Chapter 75

Gaaahhh that doctor val chick is such a slut bag!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2014 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 75

Michael has a lot of fucking nerve. A LOT! The audacity of him to go off on Cassie as if he isn't the one who fucked up? Then the nerve to get angry at the bitch who he fucked that was supposed to be their doctor, yet they took the baby to see the bitch right after the incident like some damn fools! As if there are no it what qualified doctors. Him and Cassie are both on my damn nerves. Now the baby is sick, and Michael expects for somebody to feel sorry for his punk ass. Here comes the woe is me, pity me shit. Booooo! I'm not here for it. I still wish Cassie would fuck another man and see how forgiving he is. She's just supposed to be the bigger person and just take it. I can't. That poor child shouldn't be punished, it's Michael who needs to be punished. 



Author's Response:

Oh he knows he screwed up and is angry at himself.  His pattern throughout the story was that his when he's angry he lashes out.  Look back to the paparazzi incident and the media incident in London.  He lashes out at the nearest punches bag.  On the dr strange love they didn't go back to her they went to the ER in the middle of the night and she was the only dr on call and their daughter needed to be seen.  The place they are in is a small town. To a major hospital system.  The initial concern was to get their daughter treated.  He realised he shouldn't have trusted her now.  Hindsight....They still hadn't returned to her on their own that's why he took her to a larger city for treatment.  Now the problem is Cassie won't be the punching bag anymore, where do the go and what happens to the child. Now it's time to lay all the cards out on the table and play with the hand I've dealt them.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 75 FEELING COMPLETE AGAIN

I forgot what she does for a living, or what she did for a living.. But from drama's sake, I hope she starts working again at some point and had a fling with a coworker of colleague. 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

My two cents is that I am sure Michael would not willfully be unfaithful under normal circumstances I only would be able to see that happening in a case like the one you have here (Michael being too intoxicated to be aware as being drunk can take away someone's sense of awareness) or a misunderstanding where someone forced themselves upon him and though he told her to get away and conclusions were drawn before finding out the truth or if both Cassie and Michael were having problems that were irreparable so they separated..

I am glad Cassie didn't half kill Michael or Dr. Young because at the end of the day it would not have made sense and was not worth fighting over so if Cassie was like "you want him, you can have him " to Dr. Young and divorced Michael then it would have been understandable after all you show no one that you love them more than they love you

So yeah you wrote everything just fine



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support:). Plus where would the story go after a divorce.  I tried to think of her need for stability for the children plus it's a romance and she loves him. 

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