[Report This]Date: Mar 13, 2014 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
XD femalien, it's interesting you mentioned sex toys. Because I recently saw some guy rant against women for using them just because after women use sex toys, to him, men can never do as good as the toy. They set the standard too high for men to reach. Weird rant? Yes. But it was funny to read what he was saying. But I agree with your review.
Author's Response:
But it's ok for men to get all into porn and expect women to reinact those. Because it's so realistic. Yea right every woman dreams of being a nurse, naughty teacher or maid. Lol
Date: Mar 13, 2014 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 85
Can't wait for more hopefully its soon
Date: Mar 13, 2014 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
Lol I'm not attacking you dear!! I just laughed at the irony of the situation. The whole thing is very entertaining, believe me. Can't wait to see how forgiving Michael will be. He really has no room to talk anyway. Lol
Date: Mar 13, 2014 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
Thought you had been writing it fine all along as I said having her fight Michael for what he did would not make sense since you're not supposed to show people you love them more than they love you..never mind the naysayers..
I can be emotionally invested in a story too but it depends on the scene
That said I am interested to see if Michael will forgive easily
Author's Response:
I didn't have her do this to get back at him she was emotionally lonely and was turning to Ty for comfort. I didn't want the I'm pissed off at you affair as that's wrong. Cassie isn't that type of character. She's a sensitive person who just wants to be loved. It wasn't about revenge or even sex it was about the need to be with someone and feel a physical comfort.
thanks for your loyalty. I always say if you don't like the story and where it goes you can always stop reading. People don't realize the work it takes to write. It takes a lot of times and sometimes you go in a direction you didn't intend and then you have to get yourself out.
more to come down the road
Date: Mar 13, 2014 01:02 am Title: Chapter 85
Shit, shit! Cassie, that was one major mistake. you never pay back this way. better get a sex toy if you're deprived, but don't go sleeping with another man. That was plain wrong.
Author's Response:
You got caught up I see
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2014 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 85
"Michael Jackson's your husband?" Really? No shit Sherlock!
Date: Mar 12, 2014 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 85
Lmao I'm sorry but I died laughing!!!! So she had sex with her trainer and she didn't even cum? Damn this girl can never win. Smh the man is in shape, he is at least supposed to have some rhythm. Or if all else fails, get yourself off. I mean damn Cassie. Even Michael orgasmed when he cheated and it was with a damn doctor. There is no way you can screw a supposedly sexy, in shape personal trainer and not cum at LEAST once. I mean I know there's not a correlation or guarantee, but that's still pretty fucked up. She shouldn't feel too bad though. I mean she's been goody two shoes this entire story, and Michael is the only man she'd ever been with sexually up til this point. And.. I am happy that Tyler used a condom. Shows he has respect for himself and her. Unlike Michael's trifling ass, and honestly she should've made him get tested before sleeping with him again. IDC if that slut is a doctor. She could've had something. I am glad that Cassie's guy used protection, but it's sad she didn't get her rocks off from it. Girl just can't win.
Author's Response:
Damn woman can't you cut me some slack? You are a hard woman to please.
Author's Response:
Damn woman can't you cut me some slack? You are a hard woman to please.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
Poor Katie, I completely forgot she existed. Which proves even more why Ryan and Cassie shouldn't sleep together. He'll hurt her and that wouldn't be cool. Ryan crossed line in what he said and did. He came on to another woman and then accused Cassie of trying to ruin his relationship just because she is unhappy. If Katie had walked in at all during that kiss they would have both been in trouble. So technically Cassie is right, she was wrong for kissing Ryan(her best friends boyfriend).
I would also say that Michael handled the news of the kiss like a big boy, he didn't freak and take it out on himself. So I'm proud of him.
Date: Mar 11, 2014 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
I hope the other story is updated soon. Mandy and Michael > Cassie and Michael.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 82. Loneliness sets in
Please! I need more!
Date: Mar 11, 2014 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 82. Loneliness sets in
Lmao give me a damn break. Now Ryan is officially the bad guy because he pushed a little too far. And now she feels bad for kissing him back, yet seeks solace in the place where her husband fucked another woman, UNPROTECTED may I add, and now she feels remorse for a sorry 2 second kiss? Lmao Cassie is a damn joke. Period. Ryan was a bit aggressive in his approach but he was somebody who she did at least like and trust at one point in time. In just that instance though, he's an enemy. Lmao I can't. This is so predictable now.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 06:13 am Title: Chapter 55 THE WEDDING
Bwahahaha! Those darned bells :D
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 06:01 am Title: Chapter 54 Ireland
Can't wait for the wedding!
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 04:18 am Title: Chapter 49 MICHAEL MICHAEL MICHAEL
Naughty, naughty Michael :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews. You have a lot of reading to do. Glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2014 02:46 am Title: Chapter 43 DR VAL
Awww that was really sweet. I think they'll make great parents.