Date: Feb 12, 2014 06:38 am Title: Chapter 8
I think that right now is probably a little too early for them to have a fight. Wait until things get a little more serious between the two, and they both start having real complicating problems that could trigger a fight, you know? But still, great chapter!! I'm really lovin this lol :)
Date: Feb 09, 2014 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
oh.....my....god. Dude. DUDE. THIS IS AMAZING!! I just...
I couldn't stop reading it, and trust me, my attention span is pretty low. There's honestly only a handful of stories that I can take, and from the get-go, reading this just made me smile and laugh the whole time. I LOVE Michael and Mackenzie together :) They seem just right for eachother. Keep up the great work, hun. This is fantastic <3
Author's Response:
You're too kind!
Haha, but thanks though!^-^
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2014 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 7
AAOOOOOOWWWWW MAAAAIIIIII GAAWWWWHHHDDD THE FEELS!!!!
I LOVE THIS!
Lordy I love this!!! Mac is epic!! And michael's like a five year old with his crush 😍😍😍 he is too damn sweet!!
Ah luv thiss girlllll publish again soon please!!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I swear you just made my morning.
I shall update before the day's over!😊
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2014 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 6
ADJKSKDBSOXNSOZBSKZBSKSNE
COULD YOU STOP MAKING MY INSIDES DESINTEGRATE?! Omg!!!!
Girl this is incredible!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! So hot and cute and aahhhgh i just love it to death!!
Date: Feb 04, 2014 04:59 am Title: Chapter 6
This is a really nice story. It's like a burst of fresh air in a hot stuffy room. The hot stuffy room being this website full of boring, cliche, sex- crazed stories. It's good to read a story about a wholesome relationship and not all about sex. I don't think you should add a naughty scene in for a while. I know that's what seems to attract readers but your story is way too sweet I feel like it would just ruin things. Please let Michael and Mackenzie's relationship grow. I look forward to reading more of this story!! Keep u the goo work.
Author's Response:
Your words are too kind!(':
I'll give them some time.
Date: Jan 21, 2014 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
I personally think that If you put an adult scene in there, it will be to soon. I like the rate the story is going at, it seems good and steady for a good story. Nice job so far!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2014 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Guuuurrrrl! Cut up then!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
Omg yas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They so should!!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww, realize you both feel the same way for each other already!! -_- Hope they don't get in trouble for her staying the night. :p
Date: Jan 02, 2014 11:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Awh this is so sweeet!!! Now they just need to express their love. :D
Date: Dec 30, 2013 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
awh why would you go on a date with someone when youre already seeeing Michael and youre perfect together..... go and save her mike!
Author's Response:
Amen!
Lol thanks for the review!xx
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2013 10:35 am Title: Chapter 3
I hope I don't sound horrible for saying this, but...........I'M GLAD HER DATE APPARENTLY SUCKED!! I don't even want to think about a bunch of other guys/girls getting involved and taking them forever to realize they're meant for each other. -_-
Author's Response:
I almost had the date go well, but I changed it last minute!
Haha thanks for the review!xx
& Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2013 07:07 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww, I loved this chapter! I loved the part with the older couple at ihop. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: Dec 28, 2013 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
They're in love. XD
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2013 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, that was a sweet interaction. Looking forward to reading more!