Date: Nov 07, 2013 08:05 pm Title: Prologue: Bad Habits
SOMPLEMENT- I think you mean complement, SUTHORS- I think you mean authors, what's "wre", "pieaces" and whole sentence is loosing meaning and becoming sort of COMEDY? and one can't stop laughing. You have my sympathy but do something for us-readers just improve the little things like grammar and spelling and you'll have much more reviews and readers.



Date: Nov 07, 2013 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 3:Under His Spell.... Emergancy
Girl, with some difficulty I have read all the chapters and I must say this is a good idea for really good story but because of many grammar and spelling mistakes it's difficult to read and it makes one LOL at some sentences. You said you respect readers so because of that please check your grammar, spelling and do some editing. I'm not telling you how to write your story but we want to read it with enjoyment and not getting in loud laugh every few sentences, it's not parody. Mind you, with out readers there would be no writers, so take pity on us and improve. You used to be much better at grammar and spelling, so what happened?





Date: Nov 05, 2013 01:36 am Title: Prologue: Bad Habits
I'm intrigued, what's next? Is she getting ready for a lover so when Michael comes home and sees her in the arms of another man, he will know it's over? She is not going to kill him, is she? Wow, please update soon. I love it.
Date: Nov 04, 2013 03:02 pm Title: Prologue: Bad Habits
Yessssssss!!!!! Can't say I really appreciate stories where MJ is displayed as a dispicable man. But get it girl. This story is INTERESTING