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Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I mean the story is super awesome! :-))) I was just hoping that like MJ's ghost would guide her away from killing herself. And that'd she'd live, but with the memory of him caring for her. That's it lol I'm trapped in a dream world I guess. But that's just me, I always hope "attempted suicide stories end in that sort of way. 



Author's Response:

Okaii :))) i just wanted her to be happy with Michael in a way... <3

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Sad. So horribly sad. This story is lovely, but that ending was horrible. I can't even....that ending...it got to me. Excellent job at this story, but the ending, I realky don't like it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story, but i'm confused..do you like the ending, or do you think i should have ended it another way? <3 I would really love your opinion :)))

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