[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2013 10:21 am Title: CHAPTER XXXII - New step
Hahaha! I hope the water is cold lmao! This is going to be very interesting lmao.
Author's Response:
LOOOL, let's see what happens ;)! Thank you for the rate and the review
Date: Dec 30, 2013 09:48 am Title: CHAPTER XXXII - New step
Chile idk who Ava is fooling.. They are gonna end up falling in love. I really don't think it will be that bad when the truth comes out about who she really is. Especially since it's to HELP him, not harm him. Furthermore, since they're trying this whole boyfriend girlfriend thing now, does she really think she will be able to resist sex with him? Not to mention, I don't think Michael is going to give up on them so easily. So her ideas that she will push him away and they'll just break up won't work either. Ugh she's so damn frustrating I want to shake her and slap her ass! Girl please! You have Michael Jackson wide open and wanting to be with you!!! And why not just let him come to her house?? That's another way for them to get closer too. Damn she's acting like she HAS to play a poor person. She could've had money saved up which could explain why her place is so nice. Smh she's so dumb. She needs to stop fooling herself, she is going to fuck him! And lol at his reaction to her bathing suit.
Author's Response:
Hy Kat! Ava doesn't want to fall in love too hard with Michael but it's bound to happen if they date! I guess we have to wait and see what she does lol! I agree with you for house but we know Michael is curious! We don't want him to end up on something related to the article. But I'm sure Michael will make her change her mind! :) HAHA! Michael's reaction was priceless!
Thank you for the review ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2013 08:19 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXI - Offer
Ahhhh its getting steamy!! Give in just once Ava damnit! Lmao
Author's Response:
Hey April! LMAOOOO! Let's see if Ava gives in tonight ;) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Dec 29, 2013 01:22 am Title: CHAPTER XXXI - Offer
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, love it annie!!!!!
please continue!
Author's Response:
Thank you :))) The new chapter is here :D
Date: Dec 29, 2013 01:09 am Title: CHAPTER XXXI - Offer
Chile idk why Jean is lying to herself. Girl BYE. You want that man, and he clearly wants you. I will be so glad when she's done with this damn article shit cuz it kills me to see that Michael thinks she doesn't want him, when she clearly does! And LMFAO at her saying why is her cooch always on his penis, she needs to be asking why isn't his penis IN her cooch! That is what needs to be happening, hell take the edge off. Lol. Anyway I am glad she's going with him to Monaco, and June better not start no shit. More importantly, Jean will be sharing a suite with Michael and chile I'm hoping he tries (and succeeds) to tap that ass. Lmao
Author's Response:
Hello Kat :) LOL! Yes, she wants him and he wants her but she doesn't want him to love her too much,. It's going to be hard when she has to tell him the truth :/
"And LMFAO at her saying why is her cooch always on his penis, she needs to be asking why isn't his penis IN her cooch"
I can't wait to write about Monacooo! It's going to be fun and eventful :) Thank you for the review girl :D
Date: Dec 27, 2013 01:20 pm Title: CHAPTER XXX - Sunday
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
Thank you. The new chapter is here :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2013 10:55 am Title: CHAPTER XXX - Sunday
this is hilarious so far. although Jean tends to get on my nervers for her true motives and her hypocrisy. as they say, "what's done in the dark will come to the light."
as usual, you've done it again, Annie.
:)
Author's Response:
omg, you read this story too! :')
I agree, one day she will have to the truth... or Michael will discover it! Thank you for the review and the rate girl :D Glad to see you back :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2013 06:02 am Title: CHAPTER XXX - Sunday
Looovveee ittttt!!! Lol!!!! Mike is trying to show you affection ava!! He really wants more and is trying to prove it! Lol I'll jump I the first sex imply! Just saying!! XD update soon Annie!
Author's Response:
Hey April! I'm glad you liked that chapter :) LMAO! I know I would jump before he could even make a sexual innuendo lmao! Thank yo for the review and the rate :)
Date: Dec 27, 2013 03:41 am Title: CHAPTER XXX - Sunday
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please, come back soon with another chapter!!
this night should be THE NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! no..........?
THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan! Thank you for the review and yes I am back with another chapte :D enjoy! :)
Date: Dec 26, 2013 07:34 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIX - Choices
Yassss at Michael talkin bout that G spot! Chile Jean bout ready to sample that. Lmao. How cute though. He soooo likes her. Idk who he thinks he's fooling. I know he's tryna be tame since she told him all they could ever be is friends, but I think deep down he's hoping she will not only change her mind, but hopefully HE can actually change her mind. Can't wait to see what happens next. Seems like she's having a lot of fun at Employee Day too. I'd be lying if I said I'm not hoping to see some one on one time with them though. And lol at her not being used to Ms. Janet "Ms. Jackson if ya nasty" Jackson. I love me some Janet, she is the queen.
Author's Response:
LMAOOO! Michael knows what he is doing lol! I swear, is tempted to try that! You're right, he likes her and he is unable to hide it. Maybe he wants her to see it and change her mind!
"I'd be lying if I said I'm not hoping to see some one on one time with them though" <~~ you will like the following chapters lol :)
Date: Dec 26, 2013 12:14 am Title: CHAPTER XXIX - Choices
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
I will.
[Report This]Date: Dec 24, 2013 08:53 pm Title: CHAPTER XXVIII - Affection
Lmao! I loovvee janet! She is awesome at embarrasing michael at the right moments!! Update soon! By the way MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
Author's Response:
Hey April :) I lurveee Janet too! She's going to make it funnier lol! Merry Christmas to you April!!! I hope your day was good :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Dec 24, 2013 09:46 am Title: CHAPTER XXVIII - Affection
I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online :)
Date: Dec 23, 2013 07:55 pm Title: CHAPTER XXVIII - Affection
Chile Jean shoulda beat the brakes off June's tired ass!!! Smh. I just can't. Anyway, Jean met Janet and how cute that he's talked about her to his sister!! Lol she is a beauty though. Michael needs to make June and her spawn leave.
Author's Response:
I agree, June should have ate the grass lol! But if it wasn't for Michael, Jean probably would have did worse than just pulling at her hair! IKR! It's so cute how Michael talked about June with Janet :) The new chapter is online. Merry Christmas to you Kate, I hope you had a fun day and I wish you the best for this new year. Much love!!! Love ya girl:D <33
[Report This]Date: Dec 19, 2013 04:28 pm Title: CHAPTER XXVII - War
Awww! How cute but seriously he almost killed the poor girl lol. Bad move mike...bad move...
Author's Response:
LMAO IKR! He needs to be more careful!