Date: Mar 28, 2011 07:38 am Title: The Promise
OMG I knew Joesph would find out and shame on him for hurting Michael like that. I cant believe Brianna's mom left like that and her dad should be punished for hitting her. I am really glad she has Michael to turn to.
Date: Mar 25, 2011 12:57 pm Title: Sharing A Bed
I LOVE it!!!! You're doing a pretty good job, I say keep updating and keep writing,you have some talent in your writing!!!
Date: Mar 25, 2011 04:17 am Title: Sharing A Bed
That was a sweet chapter. I love the gentleman that Michael giving the bed to Brianna. I already see that start of a beautiful friendship
Date: Mar 25, 2011 04:11 am Title: Memories and Meetings
Interesting. I like this. I love flashbacks in stories. Its a great way to tell the story to you readers.What a way to meet each other.It seems that they have something in common already.
Date: Mar 23, 2011 10:14 pm Title: Memories and Meetings
I love it, pleasee continue! :)