[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 10:08 am Title: Chapter 21- Flithy Mouths
Omg!!! Why did Rachel do that? She is so freaking messy talking all that noise. And them keys. Oh goodness, why is she messing with those damn keys...lol, Diana is really on a mission her to get to Michael.
Date: Nov 13, 2013 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
You have no idea how happy you have made me with this chapiter. I kept smiling at the screen, uummm... I really am starting to dislike Diana i think michael and Annie are so precious together. Aahhh She wanted to go back but she telt that SHE caused enough trouble. Are you kidding me? He was the one getting a lapdance. Thanks babe, cant wait to read the rest.
Author's Response:
Awwww thanks:) I'm happy I made you happy lol. Diana is seemin to start stuff. Yea when I finished reading that argument, I was like damn lol. They really went back and forth at each other. And yea, some women do not like that at all, the whole boyfriend and stripper thing...We will see how everything goes. Will update soon!!!
Date: Nov 13, 2013 02:45 am Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
Ouch, that hurt, poor Annie, poor, guilty as charged Michael. He enjoyed the lap-dance, he enjoyed more then he should. Don't you dare blame everything on Diana, she wanted that man-Michael so she was trying to get him the only way she knew how. I was once at the hen party (there were male stripes) and I'm not into this kind of things but that ADONIS (yeahh) chose to rub himself all over my arms and legs. Now in retrospective I was so stunned I forgot to enjoy myself. My husband reaction- he laughed because he knows me and he knew how uncomfortable I felt. Mind you I did not touch the male stripper. Annie is acting like primadonna girl.Tht's not the way to fight for her man. Let Annie and Michael go to Chippendale performance and see how he will react, but as a women we are different. IRL Michaels funs used to grab his everything (whisper quietly, like his family jewels ), hands were flying all over him, there is footage to see. Women were grabbing at him like crazy and we have problem with Diana, she did it with style, passion, erotica. I'm still in Diana team. I hope she will fall in love with Michael, I think she is already in love (thinking it's only lust). You see this is unrequired love and it will be very painful for Diana, she want get Michael that way (like forever) ohhhh, she will get him the only way she knows how, if not, so what's the point of the story. In the song I believed Michael loved her a little and he was there hundred times before...so. I love that chapter and I miss Diana. Let her come and do some (damage?)Yeah, we want some drama, hot sex and... you know. With lots of love
Reney.
Author's Response:
Oooooo my first long review:) Hey Reney, how are you? And you have actually been to Chippendales??? I want to see what's it's all about, I will eventually lol. Yea I see your point, even Annie at one time after the argument realized she was overreacting and should have came in and listened. Rachel did not help because she completely did her own rendition of the whole story. Michael was stunned at first but he sure did enjoy himself lol...whether he accepts it or not. He did even tell Annie what happened when Diana was on her lap, he knew he would get his ass in trouble. But he does have a point, he is Michael Jackson, females all over the world would do anything to even people around him not to even talk of touching him! Don't ask me how I would act if I saw him in the Bad Era...backstage...personally...LOL!! Let me stop lol... And yea, girl Diana is coming back...we will see what she is up to with James and Joli. And I agree Diana seduced him in a very creative and erotic way, like a siren seduces in the ocean. All I know is, Diana is up to no good lol. But you gotta love her for it!! Lol...thanks for reading!! Will update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2013 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
'The feeling is mutual, babe.' XD
Anyways, wow! Diana is causimg trouble indeed.
WOW! Great chapter! I can't wait for the next. :D
Fannice xxxx
Author's Response:
Thanks for really luv:) Yea that line was kinds of extra of Michael lol...Diana is indeed beginning to stir the pot lol...
[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2013 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
Poor Annie I really hope she don't let the tramp Diana win and Michael needs to be ashame of himself letting that home wreakin bitch come between him and Annie. I really hope Annie fights for whats her's I'm completly rooting for her.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! Thanks for reading. Yea Michael is all kinds of misbehaving with this girl...we will see how Annie will handle this whole situation since they have been okay all this time. I see we got some people rooting for Annie :) Stay tuned and thanks for reading:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2013 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 21- Flithy Mouths
AAAAAWWWW SNAP!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2013 09:22 am Title: Chapter 2- - Original Prologue
I must also add Reney,
I do sympathize with Diana because it is annoying wanting a man who has somebody with no garuntee that he may or may not want you back. And I never really saw the song that way till you brought it to my attention. I never felt sorry for her, mroe for Michael, and thought she was just some fan. But when you put it that way. I can really also understand why people may root for Diana. This is why I enjoy reading what people have to say. I also learn new things in the process.
Author's Response:
*more (I hate misspelling lol!!)
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2013 07:54 am Title: Chapter 21- Flithy Mouths
Love the visuals and James seems like nothing but trouble. Beautiful trouble, but trouble. I am going to need Annie to wake up and get her man lol. Michael and Frank interactions are funny. Frank is just....I have no words. Both of them forgot what happened to it. Diana got a another plan up her sleeve.You know, Diana is not as stupid as I thought. She is actually very witty and seems very smart. Great chapter. I am very interested to know what happens next! Update soon.
Author's Response:
We will see what James is about in the next coming chapters, also how Annie reacts. Michael and Frank, well I try to make it seem as natural as possible. I mean Frank was Michael's manager so they were always together during Bad Era. I think I put Frank a little bit earlier, but for the jist of Bad Era Michael and Frank were always together. It is unfortuanate they forgot what happened to it becuase that would have helped a lot lol. As for Diana, do not judge a book by its cover, you will be surprised what you find inside lol. Will update soon, probably tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2013 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 2- - Original Prologue
I promise I will stay tune and I will try to express my feelings as potential buyer of your books IRL. Ok ,now is Annie fainting?, she should fight with all her might for Michael. At the beginning of your story Annie came across as cock teaser ( touchy, filly, then, no, no), Jehovah and Katharina wouldn't approve (hiding behind religion) so don't tease! I like your story, oh I do but I'm in Diana team. Maybe she fell in love with Michael. (who want's just one fuck, does not matter how good it will be) she probably (Diana) wants more, a passion, money, secrets so untold, more of Michael, maybe all of him, will she get it? NO, so this is why I feel sorry for her.
Author's Response:
Thanks Reney:) I appreciate hearing that you may continue on with my story!!!! Annie, eh well if I were outside looking in and not the writer, I would like Diana also. Diana is a bad bitch!! and I love that lol. I like Annie toooooo (I am just being the biased writer lol) Now, I can not speak for what may happen throughtout the story because then I would give it all away lol!! As for now, we really do not know what Diana's true intentions are. She seems to be a fan obviously, but what else does she want him for? Michael is fighting whatever is coming over him, which is unclear also. Annie is caught in the middle and just finding out about Whistling Wind thru a messy Rachel. But all in all, I completely understand and respect your reasons for feeling a certain type of way for Diana and Annie. Annie can come across to some readers as squeaky clean and a tease lol. (But for whatever reason, Michael loves her. (Not everybody likes the girlfriends lol)). I understand with the whole, Diana seeking Michael, which may or may not be promised. Diana appreciates your love though!!! lol. I agree, Annie needs to wake up ASAP!! Will update soon.
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2013 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 20- Eyes Wide Shut
And no, Frank works my nerves man!!!! He is a catalyst to all this and he is so off not understanding Diana's sneaky ass ways. He needs to think with his brain in is head instead of his pants! The silly thing is that Diana doesn't even want his ass, she just want Michael. Men are so stupid sometimes, it is like the can not put two and two together when it is as clear as day for anybody to see. Diana needs to stop pulling his leg, but I guess she is calming that down for now. Okay, I'm done with my rant lol. But yes, Frank needs to find all kinds of life, just not is Diana. Diana is on a completely different page.
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2013 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 21- Flithy Mouths
100th!!!!!! Congrats!!!! I love this chapter! I am freaking in love with this. Poor Annie lol. James is FFFIIOOONNEEE!!!! Goodness gracious!!! Rachel is messy as hell lyin like that...women like that irk me me hella bad..omg, update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for being my 100th!!!! Love you for that lol. James is pretty handsome lol. Diana picks them well. Rachel is pretty annoying. Women like that start trouble when no trouble needs to be started. We will see how and what Annie does in the next coming chapters. Thanks for reading and supporting my story this far, more is to come:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2013 10:41 am Title: Chapter 21- Flithy Mouths
WOW!!! :0
I have no words!! LOL XD
Great chapter girl!! :)
Fannice xxxx
Author's Response:
Thanks luv:) Will update soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 20- Eyes Wide Shut
Love this chapter! Soo many questions need to be answered!! And yea Michael does look a bit jealous lol...update soon!
Author's Response:
I promise, everybody will get their answers lol. I would not leave you guys hanging like that. Will update soon for you all!
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 2- - Original Prologue
This is my 1st review of your story. I don't like Annie (somewhat she is lucking substance), I like daredevil Diana and I thought (as the title suggested) it will be story about her and Michael. I bet you ,I'm not the only one who likes Diana. Wasn't like (in the song) 'she trapped me in her heart', so Diana (from the song ) had heart and I always felt sorry for her. You know, unrequired love, wrong circumstances, but your story is about Diana the Bitch, but she is our bitch (I love the song 'Dirty Diana'. We all wanted to be Dirty Diana' at some stages of our life) LOL. Even with good looks one needs the guts to act like Diana is. LOL
Author's Response:
Hey there:) Thanks for tuning into my story. I do understand how people can like Diana even if she may come across as bad. She draws people in and creates an element of surprise. And yea I basically took Dangerous and Dirty Diana and slapped them together to create this woman. Both of the women in these songs mercilessly vie for Micheal while is has his "baby" at home. Funny story was the music video used to make me hella uncomfortable lol, I think I was being selfish and only wanted to see him dance and flirt with women, hence why I would watch The Way You Make Me Feel and Black and White a billion and one times lol. But as I got older and shook off cooties I freakin LOVE the song and have a new appreciation for the actual words and gritty beat of the song. Well Annie is more of the Good Wife kinda appeal in a girlfriend way(which I find, works for some people that like her and others, not really, so they can support her team lol, we see more of Annie though from here on out) And yea, I agree, Diana is like no other when it comes to her boldness lol. They call her Dirty for a reason lol!! I appreciate your review and feedback and hope you stayed tuned:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 17- Nasty Naughty Boy
Am I wrong for reading this again? Lol..it's just so damn hot!!!