[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2013 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
Like update. NOW. That was freaking epic. James is bold as hell. Diana did not feel jack shit of any remorse. She knows what she is getting herself into...smdh...
Author's Response:
Lol, smh @ Diana. Well, we will see what happens....
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2013 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
Wow! That was very action packed. I LOVED this chapter. I am not goign to lie, when I first saw this story, I thought it was just another typical Dirty Diana. A cliche, however, you have managed to literally take your own spin on this and make it creative. I am left waiting to see what happens. You're writing is really good. Thank you for this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, I appreciate the comment. I realy tried to take a different spin on it. I do not blame people for wiriting about the song. It is a song that draws people in and is somewhat mysterious. Thank you so much for the comment, that was really nice of you.
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2013 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 23- Ex-boyfriends and Nasty Plans with a Tabloid Junkie on Top, Please?
James is bad news. I wish Diana would just leave Annie and Michael alone. Something tells me that they are about to start major drama!
[Report This]Date: Nov 18, 2013 11:48 am Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
Daaaaaaaammmmnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! That's all I gotta say!! Update soon girl!
Author's Response:
Okay, I was so literally Laughing my ass off rolling on the floor! You are soemthing else! Lol, glad you liked tha chapter!!!!
Date: Nov 18, 2013 03:59 am Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
hey there!!! you have a nw reader.. :) I have always liked to read the stories privately but you writing soo well has compelled me to review.. lol~ good job! :) <3 the story
Author's Response:
Hey:) I always like to hear from new readers. I am reeeeaally glad to hear that you like my story. It keeps me motivated to keep writing. Thank you for taking the time to review! Hoep you continue reader the story:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2013 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
AAAAAAJFJIFJXNXNXJJCXNXBHX!!!!! Omg, I need to know what the hell happens next. That was like so freaking intense. I feel sorry for the security guards though. Man, James is fucking ruthless. Diana almost backed out or at least seemed, somewhat sorry. But I'm sure that is short-lived knowing how shiesty she can get real quick. That was real, freaking loved this chapter!!! Update extra fast this time lol!!!
Author's Response:
James is basically about that life lol. Glad you liked the chapter. It makes me happy that you enjoyed it. We will see what happens in the next coming chapters. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2013 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 24- Smooth Criminal
ooh.. oooooooohhhhh... XD
Can't wait for the next. :)
Author's Response:
Lol, believe me, you will find out soon:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2013 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 23- Ex-boyfriends and Nasty Plans with a Tabloid Junkie on Top, Please?
But u must update like ASAP!! Lol...
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2013 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 23- Ex-boyfriends and Nasty Plans with a Tabloid Junkie on Top, Please?
What is Di about to do? lol..
Author's Response:
All you got to do is refer to chapter 23, its finally up now lol:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2013 01:40 am Title: Chapter 23- Ex-boyfriends and Nasty Plans with a Tabloid Junkie on Top, Please?
I need James to sit down somewhere with his fine self lol. That plan seems well thought out though. I'm glad Annie and Michael made up, but at the same time, I'm excited to see what Diana is about to do! Update soon!!!!!! I need to know ASAP!!!
Author's Response:
Well, look now lol, I have a chapter for you lol:)
[Report This]Date: Nov 15, 2013 01:36 am Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
Okay, I do not know why I'm up lol...but anyhow, thought I would catch up on my favorite story on here. That argument got real in like 0 to 60. She should've went back, but I understand sometimes it's best to just take time to calm down...love the chapter!
Date: Nov 14, 2013 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 2- - Original Prologue
Team Annie and Michael !!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there:) Lol, I see you like the Annie and Michael? Well we will see how everything pans out:) Continue reading!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 23- Ex-boyfriends and Nasty Plans with a Tabloid Junkie on Top, Please?
Ugh, Diana needs to mind her own business and leave Michael and Annie alone. lol
Relationships are hard when you have someone stalking you.
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank luv:) Diana is really hell bent on Micaheal lol...She is not making it easy for them.
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
YYYYAAASSSS!!!!! Diana is my chick!! She is making Michael start to act...bad...Annie should've listen first instead of talking to him like that...well we will see what happens!
[Report This]Date: Nov 14, 2013 10:16 am Title: Chapter 22- Trouble in Paradise
Damn, I hope Annie and Michael will be okay. That got a little heated. I am going to need Annie to just relax for a second and talk to Michael. I am going to need Michael to tell the truth. Because once he stars lying, he won't be able to stop. Can't wait to see what everybody is up to. Joli is pretty lol. Update soon!!!!!